Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng những từ không phù hợp như "customer" hay "rainy cat and dog". Hãy mô tả thời tiết một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: The weather in my country this year has been very hot with occasional heavy rain. It is not rainy every day, but when it rains, it pours.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích thời tiết lạnh.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and refreshed. On the other hand, hot weather often makes me feel tired and uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích thời tiết ẩm ướt. Hãy sử dụng các câu đơn giản, tránh lặp lại từ ngữ.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I go to school every day, and wet weather feels fresher to me. Dry weather sometimes makes me feel uncomfortable and tired.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích tần suất cũng như lý do bạn kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

Ejemplo: I usually check the weather forecast before going to school or traveling. I check it about once a week to prepare for the weather conditions.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng, có cấu trúc. Hãy giải thích cụ thể các tác động của biến đổi khí hậu và sử dụng các câu liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I think climate change has caused many problems in recent years. For example, the weather has become more extreme, with hotter temperatures and unusual rainfall patterns.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do bạn muốn đến các thành phố có khí hậu khác và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Dallas because it is colder there, and I enjoy cold weather more than hot weather.

× In my country in this year is customer and I feel so hot and often have a rainy cat and dog but it's not.

✓ In my country, this year is hot and I often have rainy days, but it's not always like that.

The original sentence uses 'is customer' which is incorrect; likely intended 'hot'. Also, 'have a rainy cat and dog' is incorrect idiom usage; the correct phrase is 'raining cats and dogs'. The sentence also lacks proper tense and article usage. The correction uses present tense appropriately and correct idioms.

× But it's not daily it's sometime and it's always hot.

✓ But it doesn't rain daily; it rains sometimes, and it's always hot.

The original sentence has tense and adverb usage errors. 'It's sometime' should be 'it rains sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'daily' and 'sometimes' need proper placement and verb agreement.

× I really like cold because cold make me feel comfortable and I think hot is make me feel inconvenient and uncomfortable and act like cold very much.

✓ I really like cold because cold makes me feel comfortable, and I think hot makes me feel inconvenient and uncomfortable. I like cold very much.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'cold' and 'hot'. Also, 'act like cold very much' is unclear and corrected to 'I like cold very much' for clarity.

× I like wet weather because I always go to the school so I don't like dry weather.

✓ I like wet weather because I always go to school, so I don't like dry weather.

The article 'the' before 'school' is unnecessary when referring to school in general. The sentence is corrected for article usage and clarity.

× Dry weather make me feel make me feel dangerous and I I really really need wet weather.

✓ Dry weather makes me feel unsafe, and I really, really need wet weather.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'dry weather'. Also, 'make me feel dangerous' is incorrect; 'feel unsafe' is more appropriate. Repetition 'make me feel' is removed for clarity.

× Sometime I check the weather forecast when I go to the school or I go to traveling, I will check in the weather forecast sometime about one week I think check the weather forecast is really.

✓ Sometimes I check the weather forecast when I go to school or travel. I think I check the weather forecast about once a week.

The sentence has multiple tense and article errors. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'Go to the school' should be 'go to school'. 'Go to traveling' is incorrect; 'travel' is used instead. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Well, I think climate change is really really effect of recent years because climate change can make everything change.

✓ Well, I think climate change has really affected recent years because it can make everything change.

The phrase 'is really really effect' is incorrect; it should be 'has really affected' to use the present perfect tense indicating an effect over recent years.

× The weather is not good and it's so hot also.

✓ The weather is not good, and it's also very hot.

The sentence is corrected for natural adverb placement and conjunction usage.

× I really like this older cities and I like go to Dallas city because in this make me feel comfortable and extremely cold.

✓ I really like older cities, and I like going to Dallas because it makes me feel comfortable and extremely cold.

'This older cities' is incorrect; 'older cities' is correct. 'I like go to' should be 'I like going to'. 'In this make me feel' is incorrect; 'it makes me feel' is correct.

× I like cold and where I live I feel it's not so hard. I don't like hot.

✓ I like cold weather, and where I live, I feel it's not so hard. I don't like hot weather.

Added 'weather' for clarity. The sentence is corrected for natural phrasing and clarity.