Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use present tense consistently and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "The weather where I live is usually clear, and I really enjoy it. However, it changes with the seasons; for instance, during the monsoon season, there is a lot of rain, which I enjoy along with my favourite meals."

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is usually clear, and I really enjoy it. However, it changes with the seasons; for instance, during the monsoon season, there is a lot of rain, which I enjoy along with my favourite meals.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb tenses. Also, explain your reasons clearly with linking words. For example, you can say: "I prefer cold weather because I enjoy eating warm food during this time. Moreover, I can do my activities more patiently in cold weather."

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy eating warm food during this time. Moreover, I can do my activities more patiently in cold weather.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid repeating words and try to be more specific. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do sports activities comfortably. Also, I can go outside freely without worrying about rain."

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do sports activities comfortably. Also, I can go outside freely without worrying about rain.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, mentioning frequency and purpose. For example: "Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside. This helps me plan my day better and enjoy it without any problems."

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside. This helps me plan my day better and enjoy it without any problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific. Use linking words to explain causes and effects. For example: "Climate change has caused many effects in recent years. This is mainly due to excessive vehicle use and waste produced by factories, which contribute to pollution and global warming."

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused many effects in recent years. This is mainly due to excessive vehicle use and waste produced by factories, which contribute to pollution and global warming.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear parts. Avoid repetition and be specific about your experience. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "Yes, I love visiting cities with different climates. Recently, I visited the Himalayas, which was a wonderful experience. I also enjoyed the hot and warm food there."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love visiting cities with different climates. Recently, I visited the Himalayas, which was a wonderful experience. I also enjoyed the hot and warm food there.

× For example in the monsoon season there are lot of rain and I enjoying this weather with my favorite meals.

✓ For example, in the monsoon season there is a lot of rain and I enjoy this weather with my favorite meals.

The phrase 'lot of rain' requires the singular verb 'is' because 'lot' is singular. Also, 'rain' is uncountable, so 'a lot of rain' is correct. Additionally, 'I enjoying' is incorrect; it should be 'I enjoy' to match the present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× For example in the monsoon season there are lot of rain and I enjoying this weather with my favorite meals.

✓ For example, in the monsoon season there is a lot of rain and I enjoy this weather with my favorite meals.

The verb 'enjoying' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I enjoy' to express a habitual action in the present tense.

× Well, I prefer the cold weather because in this weather I enjoy the most warm food and in this in this weather I also did my do my activities very patiently.

✓ Well, I prefer the cold weather because in this weather I enjoy warm food the most and I also do my activities very patiently.

The phrase 'I enjoy the most warm food' is awkward; it should be 'I enjoy warm food the most' for correct word order. Also, 'I also did my do my activities' is incorrect; it should be 'I also do my activities' to maintain present tense and correct verb form.

× I prefer dry weather because in this weather I do my sport activities and when and I freely go to the outside area.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in this weather I do my sports activities and I can freely go outside.

The phrase 'sport activities' should be pluralized to 'sports activities'. The phrase 'when and I freely go to the outside area' is unclear and incorrect; it is better expressed as 'I can freely go outside' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Well, I'm also a person who check the weather forecast whenever I go there, whenever I go outside and it was very easy for me to enjoying my day.

✓ Well, I'm also a person who checks the weather forecast whenever I go outside, and it is very easy for me to enjoy my day.

The verb 'check' should be 'checks' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). 'Whenever I go there' is vague; 'whenever I go outside' is clearer. 'It was very easy for me to enjoying' is incorrect; it should be 'it is very easy for me to enjoy' to maintain present tense and correct verb form.

× There are a lot of effect in the climate in recent years because due to the excessive use of the vehicles by people and also the most umm waste are produced by factories.

✓ There are a lot of effects on the climate in recent years due to the excessive use of vehicles by people and also most waste is produced by factories.

'A lot of effect' should be 'a lot of effects' because 'effects' is countable and plural here. 'In the climate' should be 'on the climate' to use the correct preposition. 'The vehicles' should be 'vehicles' as a general statement. 'The most umm waste are produced' is incorrect; it should be 'most waste is produced' because 'waste' is uncountable and singular.

× So it was the main reason to know of the climate change in this.

✓ So it is the main reason to know about climate change.

The sentence uses past tense 'was' incorrectly when referring to a general cause; present tense 'is' is appropriate. 'To know of the climate change in this' is awkward; 'to know about climate change' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I love to visit other cities in which there are different climate.

✓ I love to visit other cities in which there are different climates.

'Different climate' should be pluralized to 'different climates' because 'cities' is plural and each city can have its own climate.

× For example I recently visit the Himalayas, Himalayas area and it Washington and I found it was the best experience for me.

✓ For example, I recently visited the Himalayas area and Washington, and I found it was the best experience for me.

The verb 'visit' should be in past tense 'visited' to match the adverb 'recently'. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I enjoying the ho hot and warm food.

✓ I enjoyed the hot and warm food.

'I enjoying' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'I enjoyed' to match the past tense context of the previous sentence.