Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免句子不完整和停顿，保持语言流畅自然。可以适当合并句子，使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I live in Guangzhou, where the weather changes frequently. It is usually very humid, and it often rains, especially during the rainy season that lasts for several months.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但“prefer to the cold weather”表达不自然，应改为“prefer cold weather”。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer cold weather because it helps me stay calm and refreshed. In contrast, hot weather can drive me mad and make me feel frustrated.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在断句不连贯和语法错误，如“Because the clothes is stick to my skin”应改为完整句子。建议使用连词连接句子，提升表达流畅度。

Ejemplo: I would say I prefer dry weather because I really hate the feeling of humidity. When it's very humid, I feel uncomfortable and annoyed because my clothes stick to my skin.

Sugerencia: 回答中有断句和语法错误，如“severe. Weather predicted”应连贯表达。建议使用连接词使句子更自然。

Ejemplo: I check the weather forecast every day to plan my activities accordingly. If a storm or severe weather is predicted, I will consider canceling or rescheduling my plans.

Sugerencia: 回答中断句不连贯，语法错误较多。建议合并句子，使用正确时态和连接词，使表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: From my perspective, the effects of climate change have become more noticeable in recent years. For instance, temperatures have been rising steadily, which may lead to extreme weather events.

Sugerencia: 回答中句子断裂，表达不完整。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Definitely. The city I live in is hot and humid, so I prefer cities that are colder and drier, such as Lancashire.

× It's really humid and.

✓ It's really humid.

句子中出现了不完整的连接词“and”后没有内容，导致句子结构不完整。应去掉多余的“and”使句子完整。

× I definitely prefer to the cold weather because it helps me stay calm and refreshed.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather because it helps me stay calm and refreshed.

动词prefer后直接接名词或动名词，不需要介词“to”。此处应去掉“to”。

× When it's bad.

✓ When it's bad,

该句为从句，不能单独成句，应与后文连成完整句子，或加逗号表示未完。

× Because the clothes is stick to my skin.

✓ Because the clothes stick to my skin.

clothes为复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式stick，而不是is stick。

× If there is a storm or severe. Weather predicted I will consider to cancel my schedule or reschedule my plan.

✓ If there is a storm or severe weather predicted, I will consider canceling my schedule or rescheduling my plan.

句子中“severe.”和“Weather”断开且大小写错误，且“consider to cancel”用法错误，动词consider后应接动名词形式。

× From my perspective, the effects of the climate change has become more and more noticeable.

✓ From my perspective, the effects of climate change have become more and more noticeable.

climate change前不加定冠词“the”，且effects为复数，谓语动词应用复数have。

× For instance, the temperature has kept rise for several years.

✓ For instance, the temperature has kept rising for several years.

动词短语keep后应接动词的现在分词形式，此处应为“kept rising”。

× Which may lead to the. Extreme weather.

✓ This may lead to extreme weather.

句子以关系代词“Which”开头且断句不完整，应改为完整句子。

× Definitely the city I live in is hot and humid.

✓ Definitely, the city I live in is hot and humid.

句首副词“Definitely”后应加逗号，且句子缺少连词或标点使其更通顺。

× I prefer cities. Which can be colder and drier.

✓ I prefer cities which can be colder and drier.

“Which”引导的定语从句不能单独成句，应与主句连写。