Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like 'so hard' which confuse the meaning. For example, describe the weather clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is usually cloudy during winter. It often feels cold and damp, which makes it quite uncomfortable to go outside.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference and explain your reason more clearly. Avoid redundant phrases and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather to cold because in cold weather, I find it difficult to wake up on time. Also, hot weather makes me feel more energetic during the day.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and correct grammar mistakes. Use linking words to explain your reason clearly and avoid repetition like 'pants trousers'.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because my skin is sensitive. When it's wet, I often feel itchy, especially when I wear trousers.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid confusing phrases like 'when at the time I open the door'. Use linking words to explain your habits logically.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I carry a raincoat or umbrella whenever I leave the house, just in case it rains.

Sugerencia: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your point clear and logical.

Ejemplo: Climate change has made summers much hotter in my country. For example, when I was a child, we had swimming classes in summer, but now it is often too hot to swim outside.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and explain your reason with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to gain new experiences. However, I love the climate where I live, so I prefer to travel just for a short time.

× I barely check in the weather every day, then I don't remember but I would say most of the day in winter time it's very cloudy and so hard.

✓ I barely check the weather every day, then I don't remember but I would say most of the day in winter time it's very cloudy and quite cold.

The phrase 'check in the weather' is incorrect; the verb 'check' should not be followed by 'in' here. Also, 'so hard' is incorrect to describe weather; 'quite cold' or 'very cold' is appropriate. The verb 'check' is correctly used in the present tense here as a habitual action.

× To be honest I don't like both, but I prefer to say the hot weather because in cold weather I cannot wake up in the at the proper time every time.

✓ To be honest, I don't like either, but I prefer to say hot weather because in cold weather I cannot wake up at the proper time every time.

The phrase 'like both' is incorrect when expressing dislike of two options; 'either' is correct. The phrase 'wake up in the at the proper time' contains redundant prepositions; only 'at the proper time' is correct. Also, 'the hot weather' should be 'hot weather' without 'the' as it refers to weather in general.

× I prefer dry weather because if I live in the wet weather environment I my skin is very sensitive so I feel easily itch when I wear pants trousers.

✓ I prefer dry weather because if I live in a wet weather environment, my skin is very sensitive so I feel itchy when I wear pants or trousers.

The phrase 'I my skin' is a typo and should be 'my skin'. 'Feel easily itch' is incorrect; the adjective 'itchy' should be used instead of the verb 'itch'. Also, 'pants trousers' is redundant; use 'pants or trousers'. The article 'a' is needed before 'wet weather environment'.

× To be honest, I don't. I'm not a person checking the climate every day. I just bring the raincoat or take an umbrella when at the time I open the door. And I knew that.

✓ To be honest, I don't. I'm not a person who checks the weather every day. I just bring a raincoat or take an umbrella when I go outside. And I know that.

'Checking the climate' is awkward; 'checks the weather' is more natural. 'When at the time I open the door' is incorrect; 'when I go outside' is better. 'I knew that' is past tense and inconsistent; 'I know that' is correct in present tense.

× I would give an example of my home country's climate when I was a little the we usually have a swimming class in summertime, but nowadays, too hot to do that, I'm going outside.

✓ I would give an example of my home country's climate when I was little. We usually had swimming classes in summertime, but nowadays, it's too hot to do that, so I don't go outside.

'When I was a little the we usually have' is ungrammatical; it should be 'when I was little, we usually had'. 'Have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was little'. 'Too hot to do that' needs 'it's' before it. 'I'm going outside' is incorrect in this context; 'I don't go outside' fits better.

× Yes, I would like to visit but just for my experience. I actually I love the climates now I'm living so it's OK just for travel to feel.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit, but just for the experience. Actually, I love the climate where I am living now, so it's okay just to travel for the experience.

'For my experience' is incorrect; 'for the experience' is correct. 'I actually I love' has a repeated subject; remove one 'I'. 'The climates now I'm living' is incorrect; 'the climate where I am living now' is correct. 'Just for travel to feel' is awkward; 'just to travel for the experience' is better.