Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

Ejemplo: I live in a tropical region with a humid and warm climate, which I really enjoy. I prefer this kind of weather because I love places that have sunlight almost all year round.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary relevant to the topic.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy warm and cozy conditions. Moreover, hot weather allows me to spend more time outdoors enjoying the sunlight throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some errors. Make sure to directly answer the question and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and avoid ambiguity.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather over wet weather because I enjoy having sunlight all day. Sunlight makes me feel refreshed and improves my mood, so I find dry weather more pleasant.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear reasons using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'when I grow up'.

Ejemplo: Currently, I do not regularly check the weather forecast. However, I plan to start doing so in the future because it helps me prepare for bad weather and plan my activities better.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to organize your points logically using linking words and be more specific about the effects. Avoid vague or confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: I believe climate change has caused more unpredictable weather in recent years. For example, we have seen an increase in floods and tsunamis, which affect many communities worldwide.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about what you want to experience in different climates.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling and experiencing new weather conditions. This way, I can learn about different cultures and meet new people.

× The weather and the place where I live is tropical humid and warm climate which is the favorite weather which I would love to live in because I'm a person who would love to live in a place where it's always having sunlight.

✓ The weather and the place where I live are tropical, humid, and warm climates which are the favorite types of weather that I would love to live in because I'm a person who would love to live in a place where there's always sunlight.

The subject 'The weather and the place' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'climate' should be plural to match the description of both weather and place. 'It's always having sunlight' is incorrect; it should be 'there's always sunlight' to express existence of sunlight.

× So currently I'm living in one of.

✓ So currently, I'm living in one of those places.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'one of'. Adding 'those places' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I do prefer hot weather because I'm a person who's interested to live in a warm and cozy weather rather than living in a cold and humid humid condition.

✓ I do prefer hot weather because I'm a person who's interested in living in warm and cozy weather rather than living in cold and humid conditions.

The phrase 'interested to live' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in living'. Also, 'a warm and cozy weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Repetition of 'humid' is an error. 'Condition' should be plural to match 'cold and humid'.

× So I would prefer to live in a hot weather where I can go out and have sunlight all the day.

✓ So I would prefer to live in hot weather where I can go out and have sunlight all day.

'In a hot weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take an article. 'All the day' should be 'all day' as the correct expression.

× I prefer drivers are over with weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather over wet weather.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Drivers are over with weather' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I prefer dry weather over wet weather.' 'Dry' and 'wet' are adjectives describing 'weather'.

× The main reason that I choose warm weather is because I'm a person who would love to have sunlight throughout the day and I think for me personally, sunlight is some kind of refreshment and pleasant feeling so that I would enjoy the day.

✓ The main reason that I choose warm weather is because I'm a person who would love to have sunlight throughout the day, and I think, for me personally, sunlight is a kind of refreshment and a pleasant feeling, so I would enjoy the day.

Added commas for clarity and corrected 'some kind of' to 'a kind of' which is more appropriate. Also added 'a' before 'pleasant feeling' to correct article usage.

× No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast currently, but I would love to develop a habit of checking the weather forecast in the future because when I grow up and the climate would be so miserable if I would have not checked the weather forecast, so I would do it.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast currently, but I would love to develop a habit of checking it in the future because when I grow up, the climate might be so miserable if I do not check the weather forecast, so I would do it.

'Would have not checked' is incorrect in this context; 'do not check' is appropriate for future possibility. 'Would be so miserable' changed to 'might be so miserable' to express possibility. Also, 'would do it' is acceptable here as intention.

× I think there are significant effect of climate change in the recent years because after the pandemic we had experiencing different kind of weather and every day because it's we can be more unpredictable and the world is experiencing multiple flood and tsunamis.

✓ I think there are significant effects of climate change in recent years because after the pandemic we have been experiencing different kinds of weather every day, and it can be more unpredictable. The world is experiencing multiple floods and tsunamis.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' to agree with 'significant'. 'Different kind' should be 'different kinds' to match plural. 'Had experiencing' is incorrect; 'have been experiencing' is correct present perfect continuous tense. 'Flood' should be plural 'floods'.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different climbers from where I live because I'm a person who's interested in traveling and experiencing every weather condition and culture and meet many people.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I'm a person who's interested in traveling, experiencing every weather condition and culture, and meeting many people.

'Climbers' is a typo; it should be 'climates'. Added commas for clarity. 'Meet' should be 'meeting' to maintain parallel structure with 'traveling' and 'experiencing'.

× So I would love to visit in the city where it's an opposite of my.

✓ So I would love to visit a city where the climate is the opposite of mine.

The phrase 'visit in the city' is incorrect; 'visit a city' is correct. 'It's an opposite of my' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'the climate is the opposite of mine' to clarify meaning.