Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer provides good information but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like "the the" and unnecessary phrases such as "that is from the monsoon season." Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep sentences clear and direct.

Ejemplo: I live in Punjab, which is in northern India. Summers are hot and humid, while the monsoon season from June to September brings heavy rain. Winters usually last from January to March.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit wordy and slightly unclear. Use simpler and more direct sentences. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'in my perspective' and 'if I had given a chance'.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because in summer, I often have to look for air-conditioned rooms to work on my laptop. However, in winter, I can work comfortably without such problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors like 'in the our state'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively. Try to be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because the hot and humid climate here makes it uncomfortable to go outside. So, dry days are better for me to work and exercise.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes like 'I had developed' instead of 'I have developed' and 'rainy days' should be singular or plural consistently. Try to use linking words and avoid redundancy for clarity and naturalness.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have developed a habit of checking the weather forecast for a few years. It helps me plan my routine accordingly. For example, I cancel plans on rainy days and prefer to go out on sunny days.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'very much bad impact' and 'the droughts'. Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: This question relates to my research interest as I am pursuing a master's in climate science. Climate change has had serious effects, such as increased floods and droughts, and a decline in freshwater sources.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors like 'He has given the opportunity' and 'I would like to go to researchers'. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words to express your ideas naturally.

Ejemplo: If given the opportunity, I would like to visit cities with different climates. As a climate science researcher, exploring new climates and regions would be very interesting for me.

× It is in the northern part of the India.

✓ It is in the northern part of India.

The definite article 'the' is not used before the names of most countries, including 'India'. Using 'the' here is incorrect.

× The the climate here is very hot and humid during the summer days.

✓ The climate here is very hot and humid during the summer days.

There is a repeated definite article 'the the'. Only one 'the' is needed before 'climate'.

× But in the monsoon that is from the monsoon season from June to September it rains a lot and the winter season usually lasts from January to March.

✓ But in the monsoon season, from June to September, it rains a lot and the winter season usually lasts from January to March.

The phrase 'in the monsoon that is from the monsoon season' is redundant and awkward. It is better to say 'in the monsoon season, from June to September'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× In my perspective, if I had given a chance to work under a certain environment, I would always prefer the cold environment because in the summer season we usually go here and there to find the air conditioned room to do the research work on the laptops.

✓ From my perspective, if I were given a chance to work in a certain environment, I would always prefer the cold environment because in the summer season we usually go here and there to find an air-conditioned room to do research work on laptops.

The phrase 'In my perspective' should be 'From my perspective'. 'Given a chance' should be in subjunctive mood 'if I were given a chance'. The preposition 'under' is incorrect; 'in' is correct for environment. 'Air conditioned' should be hyphenated as 'air-conditioned'. 'The research work' is better as 'research work' without 'the'. 'On the laptops' should be 'on laptops'.

× I usually prefer the dry weather as in the our state there is a hot and humid environment and it is very uncomfortable to go outside if the temperature is too humid as it sweats a lot.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather as in our state there is a hot and humid environment and it is very uncomfortable to go outside if the temperature is too humid because one sweats a lot.

The phrase 'in the our state' is incorrect; it should be 'in our state'. Also, 'it sweats a lot' is incorrect because 'it' refers to weather; better to say 'one sweats a lot' or 'people sweat a lot'.

× Yes, I had developed a habit of checking the weather forecast for a couple of years as it gives me the IT gives me the chance to make my routine which is relevant with the weather.

✓ Yes, I have developed a habit of checking the weather forecast for a couple of years as it gives me the chance to make my routine relevant to the weather.

The past perfect 'had developed' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have developed' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing up to now. Also, 'which is relevant with the weather' should be 'relevant to the weather'. The repeated phrase 'it gives me the IT gives me' is an error and corrected.

× I usually cancel my plans if there is rainy days and I make the plans on the more on the sunny days.

✓ I usually cancel my plans if there are rainy days and I make plans more on sunny days.

'There is rainy days' is incorrect; it should be 'there are rainy days' because 'days' is plural. 'Make the plans on the more on the sunny days' is awkward; better to say 'make plans more on sunny days'.

× The climate change has very much bad impact on our bad impact on ones life.

✓ Climate change has a very bad impact on our lives.

'The climate change' should be 'Climate change' without 'the'. 'Very much bad impact' is incorrect; 'a very bad impact' is correct. 'On our bad impact on ones life' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'on our lives'.

× There was increase in floods and the droughts and the fresh water sources are declining.

✓ There has been an increase in floods and droughts, and the freshwater sources are declining.

'There was increase' should be 'There has been an increase' to indicate recent changes. 'The droughts' should be 'droughts' without 'the'. 'Fresh water' is better as 'freshwater' as one word.

× He has given the opportunity. I would like to go to the other places with the different climates.

✓ If I were given the opportunity, I would like to go to other places with different climates.

'He has given the opportunity' is incorrect and unclear; it should be conditional 'If I were given the opportunity'. 'The other places' should be 'other places' without 'the'. 'With the different climates' should be 'with different climates'.

× As the climate science researcher, I would like to go to researchers.

✓ As a climate science researcher, I would like to visit research centers.

'As the climate science researcher' is incorrect; 'As a climate science researcher' is correct. 'Go to researchers' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'visit research centers' or 'go to research institutions'.

× I would like to explore the new climate season with the new regions.

✓ I would like to explore new climate seasons in new regions.

'The new climate season' and 'the new regions' are incorrect because they are general, not specific; 'new climate seasons' and 'new regions' without 'the' is correct. Also, 'with' should be 'in' to indicate location.