Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有词汇使用错误，如“swampy”和“dumped”用法不当，且句子结构不够自然。建议学习并使用更准确的天气相关词汇，如“humid”表示潮湿，避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is very humid in summer and quite damp in winter, which makes it feel uncomfortable sometimes.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇重复，如“thick thicker”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can wear lighter clothes and use a fan or air conditioner to cool down. However, in cold weather, I have to wear thicker clothes to keep warm.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，且表达不清晰。建议练习句子结构，避免重复，并提供更具体的细节。

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it feels better for my health. For instance, when I was in Tainan during winter, the climate was dry and comfortable, and my knees felt much better.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够准确，如“before weeks”不合适，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的时间表达，并使句子更简洁流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before important events, often a few days in advance, using websites like Windy.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，如“climates in earth”，建议使用更准确的表达，并丰富内容。

Ejemplo: Due to global warming, the Earth's climate has become more extreme and unpredictable. I believe we should take more environmentally friendly actions to protect our planet.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并明确表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, although I dislike winter, I enjoy snowy days. Since it doesn't snow in my country, I would love to visit places like Northeast Norfolk to experience snow.

× It's really swampy here in summer and it's very dumped in winter.

✓ It's really swampy here in summer and it's very damp in winter.

单词“dumped”用错了，正确的形容词是“damp”，表示潮湿。应使用正确的形容词来描述天气状况。

× After all, it's full of moisture but not that so comfortable.

✓ After all, it's full of moisture but not that comfortable.

“not that so comfortable”结构不正确，应该去掉“so”，使用“not that comfortable”表示“不是那么舒服”。

× I prefer hot weather because I can dress less and use like fan or air conditioner to cool me down.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can dress lightly and use a fan or air conditioner to cool me down.

“dress less”表达不准确，应该用“dress lightly”表示穿得轻薄；“use like fan”中“like”多余，应去掉，并且“fan”前需要冠词“a”。

× But if I in the cold weather I have no choice but to wear warmer and thick thicker to stay warm.

✓ But if I am in cold weather, I have no choice but to wear warmer and thicker clothes to stay warm.

句子缺少动词“am”，形容词“thick thicker”重复且顺序错误，应改为“warmer and thicker clothes”。

× For example, when I was in Tainan during winter, the climates there are are comfortable and wet and dry and my knees always feel feel comfortable during during that time.

✓ For example, when I was in Tainan during winter, the climate there is comfortable, neither too wet nor too dry, and my knees always feel comfortable during that time.

“climates”应为单数“climate”；“are are”重复；“wet and dry”表达不清，应改为“neither too wet nor too dry”；“feel feel comfortable during during”重复，应去掉重复词。

× Yes, I like to check the weather forecast before some important activities or big days and usually I do it before weeks and I will check it on the forecast website like windy.

✓ Yes, I like to check the weather forecast before some important activities or big days, and usually I do it weeks in advance. I check it on forecast websites like Windy.

“before weeks”表达不正确，应改为“weeks in advance”；“on the forecast website like windy”中“the”不必要，且“Windy”应大写，且“website”应复数以匹配“websites”。

× Due to global warming, the climates in earth now is extreme and change extremely.

✓ Due to global warming, the climate on Earth now is extreme and changes extremely.

“climates”应为单数“climate”；“in earth”应为“on Earth”；“change”应为第三人称单数“changes”。

× I think we should do more for our earth and do something environmental friendly to protect our earth.

✓ I think we should do more for our Earth and do something environmentally friendly to protect our Earth.

“environmental friendly”应为副词形式“environmentally friendly”修饰动词“do”。

× Yes I thought I mentioned that I hate the winter above but I still love the snowy days.

✓ Yes, I thought I mentioned that I hate winter above, but I still love snowy days.

“the winter”前的定冠词不必要，且“the snowy days”中“the”可去掉使表达更自然。

× But in my country it it doesn't have it doesn't snow in winter so I love to travel the northeast Norfolk.

✓ But in my country, it doesn't snow in winter, so I love to travel to the northeast Norfolk.

句中“it it doesn't have it doesn't snow”重复且结构错误，应简化为“it doesn't snow”；“travel the northeast Norfolk”缺少介词“to”。