Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تتجنب التكرار في الجملة وتستخدم تراكيب لغوية أبسط وأكثر وضوحًا. ركز على ترتيب الأفكار بشكل منطقي واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب.

Ejemplo: I enjoy living in places with rainy or cloudy weather because I prefer cold temperatures. This kind of weather puts me in a good mood and helps me feel relaxed.

Sugerencia: تجنب التكرار في الكلام وركز على بناء جملة واضحة ومترابطة. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب بشكل أفضل.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer cold weather because it puts me in a good mood and helps me feel relaxed.

Sugerencia: حاول توضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل وتجنب الأخطاء اللغوية. استخدم عبارات واضحة لتفسير سبب تفضيلك للطقس الجاف.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather stresses me out and affects my skin negatively.

Sugerencia: ركز على ترتيب الجمل بشكل صحيح واستخدم زمن الفعل المناسب. حاول استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح العلاقة بين الأفكار.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily, especially when I travel, because it helps me plan my trips better. I also depend on the weather when I go outside.

Sugerencia: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية صحيحة وتجنب التكرار. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح العلاقة بين التلوث وتغير المناخ.

Ejemplo: I believe the climate has changed recently because pollution affects the weather, making it hotter and drier.

Sugerencia: حاول تنظيم الجمل بشكل أفضل وتجنب التكرار. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة بشكل واضح.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. Since my country is hot, I enjoy rainy and cloudy weather, so I sometimes travel abroad to experience it.

× Actually I like to live in the good weather like raining or like raining or cloudy because I prefer the cold so it makes me in good mood and I feel relaxed.

✓ Actually, I like to live in good weather like rain or cloudy because I prefer the cold, so it puts me in a good mood and I feel relaxed.

The phrase 'the good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. 'Like raining or like raining' is repetitive and incorrect; 'rain' is the correct noun form. 'Makes me in good mood' should be 'puts me in a good mood' to be idiomatic and grammatically correct.

× To be honest I prefer a cold weather because put because it it puts me in a good mood and makes me to feel relaxed then the the the cold weather.

✓ To be honest, I prefer cold weather because it puts me in a good mood and makes me feel relaxed more than cold weather.

'A cold weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The phrase 'makes me to feel' should be 'makes me feel' without 'to'. The sentence is repetitive and unclear; it should be simplified for clarity.

× Actually I prefer dry weather because the wet weather makes me in a stress mood because I have a skin energy so I don't like the wet weather.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me stressed because I have sensitive skin, so I don't like wet weather.

The phrase 'makes me in a stress mood' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me stressed'. 'Skin energy' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'sensitive skin' is more appropriate. Also, 'the wet weather' can be simplified to 'wet weather'.

× Actually yes daily I checked from the weather specially when I traveled because makes me to to make the good schedule for my trips. So when I go outside dependent for the weather.

✓ Actually, yes, I check the weather daily, especially when I travel because it helps me make a good schedule for my trips. So when I go outside, I depend on the weather.

The verb tense 'checked' should be present tense 'check' to match the habitual action. 'Makes me to to make' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me make'. 'Dependent for the weather' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depend on the weather'.

× Recently I believe the climate has changed because the pollution effect for the weather and and it it be more hot and very dry.

✓ Recently, I believe the climate has changed because pollution affects the weather, and it has become hotter and very dry.

'The pollution effect for the weather' is incorrect; it should be 'pollution affects the weather'. 'It it be more hot' is grammatically incorrect; correct form is 'it has become hotter'.

× To be honest, yes, I prefer to visit other cities because in my country we live in hot weather so I love the raining weather and the cloud weather so some sometimes I travel to another country to.

✓ To be honest, yes, I prefer to visit other cities because in my country we live in hot weather, so I love rainy and cloudy weather. Sometimes, I travel to another country too.

'Raining weather' and 'cloud weather' are incorrect; the correct adjectives are 'rainy' and 'cloudy'. 'Some sometimes' is repetitive; 'sometimes' alone is sufficient. 'Travel to another country to' is incomplete; 'too' is the correct word to indicate 'also'.