Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, nên dùng 'there is a dry season' thay vì 'there are dry season', và 'it often pours' thay vì 'it often pour'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: The weather in my hometown in Vietnam has two main seasons. There is a dry season when it is usually hot and sunny, and a rainy season when it rains a lot and the air becomes very humid. For example, during the rainy season, it often pours in the afternoon.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý chính tả và chọn từ phù hợp hơn, ví dụ 'professing' không đúng nghĩa, có thể dùng 'refreshing' hoặc 'pleasant'. Từ 'hot cheers' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, nên dùng 'hot drinks'. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý chia động từ số nhiều/số ít đúng ngữ pháp.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing. For example, in cold weather, I can enjoy outdoor activities like walking or drinking hot drinks, which I really like. Also, the cold weather in Vietnam during winter makes everything feel peaceful and cozy.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'go outdoor' nên là 'go outdoors', 'worrying about rent' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, có thể bạn muốn nói 'worrying about rain'. Câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chủ ngữ, nên sửa lại để rõ nghĩa và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient. For example, during the dry season, I can easily go outdoors with my friends and do various activities without worrying about rain. This means I don't have to cancel my plans, which makes dry weather more enjoyable for me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên dùng cụm từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'I have a habit of checking' thay vì 'I am in the hobbies of checking'. Ngoài ra, 'The rent here' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, có thể bạn muốn nói 'The rain here'. Cần chú ý chia động từ số nhiều/số ít đúng ngữ pháp.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast regularly, especially in the morning. My father and I are farmers, so we need to know the weather to plan our work on the farm. The rain here can be very unpredictable, so checking the forecast helps us avoid any problems.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'had had' nên là 'has had', 'leads' nên đồng nhất thì với câu trước. Câu 'many coastal area are as crisp of flooding' không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa lại cho chính xác và rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has had a significant impact on the environment. It has increased the greenhouse effect, which causes global warming and leads to rising sea levels. As a result, many coastal areas are at risk of flooding and extreme weather events.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý số nhiều/số ít, ví dụ 'visit city' nên là 'visit cities'. Ngoài ra, 'winter activity' nên là 'winter activities' để phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ cụ thể, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. From my own experience, a new climate, such as a colder or more tropical environment, can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities that are not possible where I live.

× There are dry season when it's usually hot and sunny and a rainy season when it rains a lot and the air become very humid.

✓ There are dry seasons when it's usually hot and sunny and a rainy season when it rains a lot and the air becomes very humid.

The noun 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to two distinct types of seasons. Also, 'air become' should be 'air becomes' to agree with singular subject 'air'.

× For example, during the rainy season it often pour in the afternoon.

✓ For example, during the rainy season it often pours in the afternoon.

The verb 'pour' should be in third person singular form 'pours' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer the cold weather because I find it more comfortable and professing.

✓ I prefer the cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing.

The word 'professing' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'refreshing' to describe the feeling of cold weather.

× Also, the cold weather in Vietnam during winter make everything feel peaceful and cozy.

✓ Also, the cold weather in Vietnam during winter makes everything feel peaceful and cozy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'cold weather'.

× I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient. For example, during the dry season, I can easily go outdoor with my friends and do various activities without worrying about rent.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient. For example, during the dry season, I can easily go outdoors with my friends and do various activities without worrying about rain.

The correct adverb is 'outdoors' not 'outdoor' when referring to going outside. Also, 'rent' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'rain'.

× This means I really have to cancel my plans, which make the dry weather more enjoyable for.

✓ This means I really don't have to cancel my plans, which makes the dry weather more enjoyable for me.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which' referring to the situation. Also, the sentence was missing 'don't' to convey the intended meaning. Added 'for me' for completeness.

× Definitely, I am in the hobbies of checking the weather forecast regularly, especially in the morning.

✓ Definitely, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast regularly, especially in the morning.

The phrase 'I am in the hobbies of' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I have the habit of' to indicate a regular activity.

× The rent here can be very unpredictable, so checking the forecast help us avoid any problems.

✓ The rain here can be very unpredictable, so checking the forecast helps us avoid any problems.

'Rent' is incorrect; the intended word is 'rain'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'checking the forecast'.

× In recent years, climate change had had a significant impact on the environment.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a significant impact on the environment.

The present perfect tense 'has had' is appropriate here to indicate an effect continuing to the present, rather than past perfect 'had had'.

× It increased the greenhouse effect which caused global warming and leads to rising sea level.

✓ It increases the greenhouse effect which causes global warming and leads to rising sea levels.

The present tense 'increases', 'causes', and 'leads' should be used to describe ongoing facts. Also, 'sea level' should be plural 'sea levels' to refer to general rising levels.

× As a result, many coastal area are as crisp of flooding and extreme weather events.

✓ As a result, many coastal areas are at risk of flooding and extreme weather events.

'Area' should be plural 'areas' to agree with 'many'. 'Are as crisp of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'are at risk of'.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different climates.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates.

'City' should be plural 'cities' to match the context of visiting multiple places with different climates.

× From my own experience, a new climate such as a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

✓ From my own experience, a new climate such as a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× For example, visiting a snow city would allow me to try winter activity that's not possible where I live.

✓ For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities that aren't possible where I live.

'Snow city' should be 'snowy city' to use the correct adjective form. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'try'. 'That's' should be 'that aren't' to agree with plural 'activities'.