Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer descriptions.

Ejemplo: The weather in Hong Kong is quite unpredictable. For instance, it might be sunny when I leave the house, but a few hours later, it could suddenly start raining.

Sugerencia: Improve coherence by using linking words and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your feelings about the weather.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to enjoy warm meals like hot pot or noodles, which are very comforting. In contrast, hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and less energetic.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and avoid hesitation or repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and try to use more precise vocabulary to describe sensations.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions often make me feel sticky and uncomfortable. Therefore, I feel much better and more refreshed on dry days.

Sugerencia: Avoid contradictory statements and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to organise your answer logically and keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I find the weather unpredictable. I prefer to be surprised by the weather when I go outside, so I don't make it a daily habit.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Provide specific examples and use linking words to explain the effects logically. Avoid vague or incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I believe climate change has worsened recently, causing severe effects such as deforestation and the loss of many animal species. For example, many forests have disappeared, which affects biodiversity.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear example to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. It would be a great challenge since I am quite comfortable and less social in my hometown. For example, traveling would help me become more independent and confident by managing new situations.

× some when I go out is sunny days

✓ sometimes when I go out it is sunny days

The phrase 'some when' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate occasional occurrences. Also, 'is sunny days' mixes singular verb 'is' with plural 'days'; it should be 'it is sunny' or 'there are sunny days'. Here, 'it is sunny' fits better.

× when I walk past a few hours later, it is a rainy day

✓ when I walk past a few hours later, it is a rainy day

The phrase 'walk past a few hours later' is awkward and unclear. It should be 'a few hours later when I go out again, it is a rainy day' to clarify the time reference. However, this is more about sentence structure than grammar problem type 1, so no correction under type 1.

× which give me a sense of satisfaction

✓ which gives me a sense of satisfaction

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to singular 'a cup of noodles' or the singular idea, so the verb should be singular 'gives' not 'give'.

× I feel uncomfortable during the weather

✓ I feel uncomfortable in the weather

The preposition 'during' is used for periods of time, not for weather conditions. The correct preposition to express feeling discomfort because of weather is 'in'.

× when you are staying in the wet weather it feels like you, you always feel sticky or some uncomfortable things

✓ when you are staying in wet weather, it feels like you always feel sticky or some uncomfortable things

The pronoun 'you' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'some uncomfortable things' is vague; 'some uncomfortable feelings' would be better, but that is not corrected here as per instructions.

× I I don't like these feelings and in dry weather I can feel much better in that day

✓ I don't like these feelings and in dry weather I can feel much better that day

The repeated 'I' is a typo and should be removed. Also, 'in that day' is incorrect; it should be 'that day' without 'in'.

× No, of course I'm not having a habit of checking the weather forecast

✓ No, of course I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast

The phrase 'I'm not having a habit' is incorrect; 'have' is a stative verb and does not use continuous form. The correct modal verb usage is 'I don't have a habit'.

× Now there is and the this phenomenon have effects

✓ Now this phenomenon has effects

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is' and 'have' together and misplaces 'the'. 'Phenomenon' is singular, so the verb should be 'has'. 'The this' is redundant; only 'this' is needed.

× Many trees are broken, many forests are disappears

✓ Many trees are broken, many forests have disappeared

'Forests' is plural, so the verb should be plural and in correct tense. 'Are disappears' is incorrect; it should be 'have disappeared' to indicate completed action.

× some eyes are also we cannot see anymore

✓ some species are also ones we cannot see anymore

'Some eyes' is incorrect; likely the speaker meant 'some species' or 'some animals'. 'Eyes' is not a countable noun in this context. Also, sentence structure is awkward; corrected to 'some species are also ones we cannot see anymore'.

× Yes, I would definitely let the visit sides with different kinds

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities of different kinds

'Let the visit sides' is incorrect usage of pronouns and verbs. The correct phrase is 'like to visit cities'. 'Sides' is incorrect; 'cities' fits the context.

× it would be a great challenge for me living in Living in my hometown

✓ it would be a great challenge for me living in my hometown

The phrase 'living in Living in' repeats 'Living in' unnecessarily; one should be removed.