Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但部分表达不够自然，如“rains every day nearly”应为“it rains almost every day”。建议注意语序和固定搭配，使表达更地道。

Ejemplo: I live in Zhengzhou, where the weather is quite pleasant. In spring and autumn, it is comfortable and mild. However, summers are hot and humid, and it almost rains every day in August.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“that makes me feel”应为“which makes me feel”。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I don't like wearing many layers of clothes, which makes me feel restricted in my movements.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达有误，如“four years before”应为“four years ago”，“that makes”应为“which makes”。建议注意时态和关系代词的正确使用。

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather based on my personal experience. I lived in Guangzhou about four years ago, where the weather was hot and humid. There were many insects, which made me feel uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: 表达中有词汇使用错误，如“chatting the weather forecast”应为“checking the weather forecast”。建议注意词汇搭配，避免用词错误。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go to bed. Based on it, I prepare my clothes for the next day.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。建议增加连接词如“for example”或“as a result”来丰富表达。

Ejemplo: I think climate change has made the weather hotter, especially in summer. For example, many people suffered from heat stroke last month, which is very dangerous.

Sugerencia: 回答简洁明了，但“the Sanya”中冠词使用错误，应为“Sanya”。建议注意专有名词的正确使用。

Ejemplo: Definitely, I'd like to visit some warm and tropical cities like Sanya to enjoy the sunshine and the beach.

× Especially in August, it rains every day nearly.

✓ Especially in August, it nearly rains every day.

副词 'nearly' 放置位置不正确，应该放在动词前面以修饰动词，表达“几乎每天都下雨”。

× There are many insects that makes me feel awful.

✓ There are many insects that make me feel awful.

关系代词 'that' 指代复数名词 'insects'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'make'，保持主谓一致。

× Yes, I actually like chatting the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I actually like checking the weather forecast.

动词 'chatting' 意为聊天，不符合语境，应使用 'checking' 表示查看天气预报。