Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and keep your answer concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about the weather.

Ejemplo: I live in Adelaide, where the weather is quite moderate. Summers are pleasantly long, while winters can get quite cold, which I really enjoy.

Sugerencia: Good answer but avoid filler words like 'to to' and 'and'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and add a bit more detail to explain why you prefer cold weather.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the foggy and chilly atmosphere. It’s perfect for going out for a walk and feeling refreshed.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy going for long drives in the rain. Also, dining out while it’s raining creates a cosy and enjoyable atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words and be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and give a clear, structured answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely check the weather forecast every morning. I usually open the weather app on my phone to see what the day will be like.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused weather patterns to become more extreme. For instance, summers are getting hotter, and winters and rainfall are also becoming more intense.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid filler words and finish your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I love travelling and exploring new places. I would especially like to visit cities in Western Australia or the Northern Territory, where the climate is quite different from Adelaide.

× we get nice length of summers

✓ we get nice lengths of summer

The phrase 'nice length of summers' is incorrect because 'length' should be plural to match 'summers', and 'summer' is usually uncountable or singular when referring to the season in general. The correct phrase is 'nice lengths of summer' to indicate multiple periods of summer with good length.

× the weather's are becoming more intense

✓ the weathers are becoming more intense

The contraction 'weather's' is incorrect here because 'weather' is a non-count noun and does not have a plural form. However, in this context, the speaker likely means 'weather patterns' or 'weather conditions'. To correct, either say 'the weather is becoming more intense' or 'the weather patterns are becoming more intense'. Using 'weathers' is uncommon but acceptable in some contexts to mean different types of weather.

× with each passing years

✓ with each passing year

The phrase 'each passing years' is incorrect because 'each' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun. Therefore, 'year' should be singular, making the correct phrase 'with each passing year'.

× Just definitely I love traveling and exploring different places and definitely I would like to go somewhere, especially in WA or NT where temperature.

✓ I definitely love traveling and exploring different places, and I would especially like to go somewhere in WA or NT where the temperature is different.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a main verb in the last clause. The phrase 'where temperature' is incomplete and needs a verb and article to be grammatically correct. The corrected sentence improves clarity and structure by adding necessary verbs and articles.