Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details about the seasons and weather patterns. Use linking words like 'however' correctly to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is generally temperate. During summer, it is usually bright and sunny throughout the day. However, we do experience occasional rain during the rainy season, which helps cool things down. Overall, the weather changes depending on the season.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and avoid contradictions in your answer. Use fewer filler words and structure your response with a clear preference and reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'on the other hand' properly to contrast ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather over hot weather because hot weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. On the other hand, cold weather feels refreshing and makes me happy. Therefore, I enjoy colder climates more.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Be specific about why you like both dry and wet weather, and organise your answer clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I like both dry and wet weather for different reasons. Dry weather is comfortable for outdoor activities, while wet weather brings a refreshing chill and makes the environment feel lively. Because of these reasons, I enjoy both types of weather.

Sugerencia: Try to speak clearly and avoid hesitation. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details about when and why you check the weather forecast. Use linking words like 'if' and 'so' to explain your habits.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast the day before if I have any plans. This helps me prepare accordingly, such as choosing appropriate clothes or deciding whether to carry an umbrella.

Sugerencia: Avoid unclear phrases and filler words. Provide specific examples of climate change effects and organise your answer logically. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to explain your points clearly.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused unpredictable weather patterns in recent years. For example, it might rain heavily in the morning and then become sunny in the evening. These changes affect the environment and people's daily lives.

Sugerencia: Speak clearly and avoid unnecessary words. Structure your answer with a clear statement of your interest and reasons. Use linking words like 'for example' to support your answer with specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to travel to South Korea because it has a cold climate and often snows, which is very different from where I live.

× Well, it's mostly, uh, it's usually summer because we live in a temperate part of the world.

✓ Well, it's mostly, uh, usually summer because we live in a temperate part of the world.

The phrase 'it's mostly, uh, it's usually summer' is redundant with two 'it's'. Removing the second 'it's' improves sentence flow and correctness in present tense usage.

× So it's quite bright and, uh, sunny during the week time.

✓ So it's quite bright and, uh, sunny during the daytime.

The phrase 'during the week time' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'during the daytime' to indicate the time of day when it is bright and sunny.

× And then however, it does rain occasionally, uh, during the rainy season.

✓ However, it does rain occasionally, uh, during the rainy season.

Using both 'and then' and 'however' together is redundant and incorrect. 'However' alone is sufficient to introduce a contrast.

× So it's, it's, uh, it's kind of depends on the seasons.

✓ So it kind of depends on the seasons.

The phrase 'it's kind of depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb that should not be preceded by 'it's'. The correct form is 'it kind of depends'.

× I definitely feel uh, prefer hot cold weathers over hot weather cause during the hot weather, uh, it usually makes me sweaty and sticky, which is quite uncomfortable.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather over hot weather because during hot weather, it usually makes me sweaty and sticky, which is quite uncomfortable.

The phrase 'hot cold weathers' is incorrect; 'cold weather' is uncountable and singular. Also, 'cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formal correctness.

× On the other hand, uh, in case of cold weather, uh, it feels very nice.

✓ On the other hand, in the case of cold weather, it feels very nice.

The phrase 'in case of cold weather' should be 'in the case of cold weather' to correctly use the prepositional phrase.

× It feels really good and it should be weathered, uh, makes me feel happy, umm, uncomfortable.

✓ It feels really good and the weather makes me feel happy, not uncomfortable.

The phrase 'it should be weathered' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that the weather makes the speaker feel happy, so it should be rephrased accordingly.

× If we had to choose, I would choose both uh, because I love dry weather as well as red weathers and some scenarios while in case of rainy season, I definitely like uh, that weathers cause the rain and the road and the uh, cold, uh, chilly climate makes me feel so nice and I love to love.

✓ If I had to choose, I would choose both because I love dry weather as well as rainy weather in some scenarios. During the rainy season, I definitely like that weather because the rain, the road, and the cold, chilly climate make me feel so nice and I love it.

The phrase 'red weathers' is incorrect; it should be 'rainy weather' which is uncountable. Also, 'that weathers' should be 'that weather'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I checked whether I was doing.

✓ Well, I check the weather regularly.

The phrase 'I checked whether I was doing' is incorrect and unclear. The present tense 'I check the weather regularly' fits the context better as the question is about habit.

× I usually check weathers during the ha uh, before the day off on some plants in case if I had a plan, I would check the weather the day before and get to know about the weather and make myself prepared for it.

✓ I usually check the weather before a day off or if I have plans. I check the weather the day before to get to know about it and prepare myself.

The word 'weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable. Also, 'plants' should be 'plans'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× While the climatic changes are getting worse nowadays, umm, environmental is not as it is the way it was before.

✓ While the climatic changes are getting worse nowadays, the environment is not the way it was before.

The word 'environmental' is an adjective and incorrectly used as a noun here. The correct noun is 'environment'.

× It is love.

✓ It is obvious.

The phrase 'It is love' is unclear and likely a misstatement. Replacing it with 'It is obvious' or a similar phrase clarifies the intended meaning.

× There is a lot of changes in deployment.

✓ There are a lot of changes in development.

'Changes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'deployment' seems incorrect in context; 'development' is likely intended.

× Uh, you could say that it's raining in the morning and then it's like, uh, sunny in the evening.

✓ You could say that it rains in the morning and then it is sunny in the evening.

Using 'it's raining' and 'it's like' is informal and less precise. Using simple present tense 'it rains' and 'it is' is better for general statements about climate.

× So the climatic conditions are quite.

✓ So the climatic conditions are quite variable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an adjective or complement after 'quite'. Adding 'variable' completes the thought.

× Yes, effectively love to visit other cities.

✓ Yes, I definitely love to visit other cities.

The phrase 'effectively love' is incorrect. 'Definitely love' is the correct expression to convey strong preference.

× It has to protect planets.

✓ It has to protect the planet.

'Planets' is plural but contextually likely refers to 'the planet' Earth. Also, 'It has to protect' is unclear; possibly intended as 'We have to protect the planet'.

× For example, I love to travel to South Korea because it usually they have a very cold, uh, cold climatic temperature and I prefer uh, it's usually snow in there.

✓ For example, I love to travel to South Korea because they usually have a very cold climate and it usually snows there.

The phrase 'it usually they have' is incorrect; 'they usually have' is correct. Also, 'it's usually snow in there' should be 'it usually snows there'.

× So I definitely love to travel down.

✓ So I definitely love to travel there.

The phrase 'travel down' is incomplete and unclear. 'Travel there' correctly completes the sentence.