Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时句子结构不完整，存在语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: The weather in Macau has been quite gusty and overcast this week because of typhoon Weep Up. Due to the strong winds and thick clouds, it feels gloomy outside, and most people prefer to stay at home.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并注意语法准确性。

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy winter sports like snowboarding and skiing, which are only possible in winter. Also, I love drinking hot cocoa on chilly days, which makes the cold weather feel cozy and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，且句子不完整。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，使用正确的词汇表达。

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because once I got completely soaked walking home from school in the rain. It was very uncomfortable, and I felt cold all day, which eventually led to me catching a fever.

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但句子衔接略显生硬。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: I love checking the weather forecast almost every day because in Macau, heavy rain or typhoons often cause school closures. This policy is popular among students since it means a day off. I usually check the forecast on my phone to see if it will rain the next day.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且部分词汇使用不当。建议注意语法准确性，补充完整句子，并使用恰当词汇。

Ejemplo: For me, one significant effect of climate change is the increase in extreme weather events, such as more severe typhoons and hurricanes worldwide. In addition, these events seem to occur more frequently than they did about 10 years ago, causing flooding in some areas.

Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更丰富的句型和连接词，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I would love to visit the North Pole and the areas around the equator, which are the coldest and hottest places on Earth respectively. It has always been my dream to experience both extreme climates.

× The weather in Macau it's been quite gusty and overcast this week, mainly due to the effects of typhoon Weep up.

✓ The weather in Macau has been quite gusty and overcast this week, mainly due to the effects of typhoon Weep up.

句中“it's been”中的“it is”与后面的“been”搭配不当，应直接使用现在完成时“has been”表示从过去持续到现在的状态。

× Because of the strong wind and thick clouds.

✓ Because of the strong wind and thick clouds,

该句为不完整句，缺少主句，应该与后文合并或补充主句，使句子完整。

× It's pretty gloomy outside and most of the cities and prefer to stay at home.

✓ It's pretty gloomy outside and most people prefer to stay at home.

句中“most of the cities and prefer”结构不完整且不合逻辑，应改为“most people prefer”，使句子通顺且有意义。

× I prefer cold weather because I enjoy winter sport like snowboarding and skiing which are only possible in winter and also I love drinking hot cocoa, doing chilly days which make the cold weather feel cozy and enjoyable overall cool.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I enjoy winter sports like snowboarding and skiing which are only possible in winter, and also I love drinking hot cocoa on chilly days which make the cold weather feel cozy and enjoyable overall.

“winter sport”应为复数“winter sports”，表示多种冬季运动；“doing chilly days”表达不当，应改为“on chilly days”表示在寒冷的日子里。

× Or wet weather. I definitely prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I had a bad experience once when my soggy got completely soggy after walking home from school in the rain.

✓ I prefer wet weather. I definitely prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I had a bad experience once when my bag got completely soggy after walking home from school in the rain.

句首“Or wet weather.”不完整且不合逻辑，应改为“I prefer wet weather.”；“my soggy”应为“my bag”，原句中“soggy”是形容词，不能作为名词使用。

× It was so uncomfortable and make me feel cold all day and after that I got fever that was.

✓ It was so uncomfortable and made me feel cold all day, and after that I got a fever.

“make”应为过去式“made”，与前文过去时态保持一致；“got fever that was”表达不完整，应改为“got a fever”。

× I love checking the weather forecast almost every day. Because in Macau there is a heavy rain or typhoon, schools are often closed.

✓ I love checking the weather forecast almost every day because in Macau, when there is heavy rain or a typhoon, schools are often closed.

“Because”引导的原因状语不能单独成句，应与前句合并形成完整句子；“a heavy rain”应去掉冠词“a”，改为“heavy rain”。

× This policy is popular among students since it means a day off.

✓ This policy is popular with students since it means a day off.

“popular”后应接介词“with”表示“受欢迎”，而非“among”。

× I usually check the forecast on my phone to see if it will rain the next day, even till now.

✓ I usually check the forecast on my phone to see if it will rain the next day, even now.

“even till now”表达不自然，改为“even now”更符合习惯用法。

× For me, one of the significant effects of climate change is to increase in extreme weather events, such as more severe typhoon and hurricanes happening all around the world.

✓ For me, one of the significant effects of climate change is an increase in extreme weather events, such as more severe typhoons and hurricanes happening all around the world.

“to increase”应改为名词短语“an increase”；“typhoon”应为复数“typhoons”，与“hurricanes”保持一致。

× In addition, it seems to ring more frequently than it did about 10 years ago, which caused flooding in some area also in.

✓ In addition, it seems to rain more frequently than it did about 10 years ago, which has caused flooding in some areas as well.

“ring”应为“rain”；“some area”应为复数“some areas”；“also in”表达不清，应改为“as well”。

× I would love to go to the North Pole and area around the equator which are the coldest place and the hottest area on earth.

✓ I would love to go to the North Pole and the area around the equator, which are the coldest place and the hottest area on earth.

“area”前缺少冠词“the”；“coldest place”应为复数“coldest places”或保持单数与“area”对应。

× That would be my dream to visit both of them.

✓ That would be my dream to visit both of them.

该句无语法错误，无需修改。