Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تستخدم جمل أكثر وضوحًا وطبيعية، وتجنب التكرار. مثلاً، بدلاً من قول "It's really burning" استخدم "It's extremely hot". كما يجب أن تكمل الجملة الأخيرة لتكون مفهومة.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is extremely hot, especially during the summer. It's so hot that touching metal surfaces like car doors can be painful. Therefore, people often wear gloves or use cloths to avoid burns.

Sugerencia: حاول توضح أفكارك بشكل أفضل وتستخدم كلمات مناسبة. مثلاً، بدلاً من "feel freely" استخدم "feel comfortable". كما يمكنك ربط الجمل باستخدام أدوات ربط مثل "because" و"so".

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and allows me to move easily. Also, I don't get tired quickly when I walk outside, so I can enjoy my daily activities without stress.

Sugerencia: هناك خطأ في كلمة "What's" يجب تصحيحها إلى "wet" أو "dry". كما يجب أن تكون الجمل أكثر وضوحًا وترابطًا، واستخدم تعبيرات مناسبة لوصف الطقس وتأثيره على مزاجك.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I find it beautiful and it lifts my mood. Also, I enjoy taking pictures when it rains because the scenery looks fresh and vibrant.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً. تجنب التكرار مثل "we all all". كما يجب أن توضح سبب عدم التحقق من النشرة الجوية بشكل منطقي.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because the weather here is almost always hot and dry. So, I already expect it to be sunny and warm every day.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تكون جملك كاملة وواضحة. استخدم أدوات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك. تجنب الجمل غير المكتملة مثل "I believe that." و"it's not in". كما يمكنك توضيح تأثيرات التغير المناخي بشكل أكثر تحديداً.

Ejemplo: I think pollution is the main cause of climate change. For example, smoke from factories and cars increases greenhouse gases. Although some people disagree, I believe these factors have serious effects on our environment.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تجعل الجمل أكثر طبيعية وترابطاً. بدلاً من قول "Other climate than what I live in" استخدم "a different climate from mine". كما يمكنك إضافة تفاصيل أكثر عن سبب رغبتك في الزيارة.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be exciting to experience new weather conditions and explore different environments.

× It's really burning.

✓ It's really burning hot.

The phrase 'burning' is used as an adjective here but sounds incomplete without 'hot'. Adding 'hot' clarifies the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× You should wear gloves when you.

✓ You should wear gloves when you go outside.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'when you'. Adding 'go outside' completes the sentence and clarifies the context.

× I prefer cold weather because you can feel freely and you can move really freely and become protective in your daily life.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I can feel free, move easily, and be more protected in my daily life.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used when the speaker refers to themselves. Also, 'feel freely' is incorrect; it should be 'feel free'. The sentence is corrected to use 'I' and proper expressions.

× I prefer What's weather because it is beautiful weather and it puts my moods over the moon and I can take pictures in my phone.

✓ I prefer warm weather because it is beautiful, lifts my mood, and I can take pictures on my phone.

'What's weather' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'warm weather'. 'Puts my moods over the moon' is an incorrect expression; 'lifts my mood' is appropriate. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'.

× No, I'm not in a habit of checking the weather forecasts because we all all know that it is hot here and it's impossible to get wet or to be cold even.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast because we all know that it is hot here and it's almost impossible to get wet or cold.

The phrase 'in a habit' should be 'in the habit'. 'Weather forecasts' can be singular 'weather forecast' when referring generally. 'Impossible to get wet or to be cold even' is awkward; 'almost impossible to get wet or cold' is clearer.

× I think pollution is the reason. Moreover, I believe that. Smoke factors it's the main reason, however some people believe it's not in.

✓ I think pollution is the reason. Moreover, I believe that smoke is the main cause; however, some people believe otherwise.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Smoke factors it's the main reason' is incorrect; it should be 'smoke is the main cause'. 'Some people believe it's not in' is unclear; 'believe otherwise' is clearer.

× Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because it would be a great idea to explore. Other climate than what I live in.

✓ Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because it would be a great idea to explore climates different from mine.

The sentence is split awkwardly. 'Other climate than what I live in' is incomplete and unclear. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and grammar.