Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structure and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "The weather is usually sunny, but during the rainy season, it often becomes cloudy."

Ejemplo: The weather is usually sunny, but during the rainy season, it often becomes cloudy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, say "I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable as I sweat a lot. Therefore, cold weather suits me better."

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable as I sweat a lot. Therefore, cold weather suits me better.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I prefer dry weather because wet weather often causes traffic jams, which makes transportation inconvenient."

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather often causes traffic jams, which makes transportation inconvenient.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and organise your answer more clearly. For example, "Yes, I always check the weather forecast. If I have to go to school on Monday, I usually check it on Saturday or the night before. In fact, I check it almost every day."

Ejemplo: Yes, I always check the weather forecast. If I have to go to school on Monday, I usually check it on Saturday or the night before. In fact, I check it almost every day.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. Avoid filler words and improve vocabulary. For example, "Climate change is mainly caused by CO2 emissions, which are harmful. These emissions lead to rising sea levels and ocean acidification, causing coral reefs to die."

Ejemplo: Climate change is mainly caused by CO2 emissions, which are harmful. These emissions lead to rising sea levels and ocean acidification, causing coral reefs to die.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating ideas. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, "I enjoy living in Sydney because of its great climate and fresh air. However, I would like to visit other cities with different climates to experience new environments."

Ejemplo: I enjoy living in Sydney because of its great climate and fresh air. However, I would like to visit other cities with different climates to experience new environments.

× The weather I think normally sunny but if it in a rainy season I also got cloudy as well.

✓ I think the weather is normally sunny, but during the rainy season, it also gets cloudy.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and verb forms. 'The weather I think normally sunny' is missing the verb 'is'. 'If it in a rainy season' is incorrect; it should be 'during the rainy season'. 'I also got cloudy' is incorrect; the weather 'gets' cloudy, not 'I got'. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing.

× I would prefer cold weather because I think hot weather is kind of nasty and I always sweat a lot, so rather than hot I would prefer cold.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I think hot weather is kind of nasty and I always sweat a lot, so rather than hot, I prefer cold.

The use of 'would prefer' suggests a hypothetical or conditional preference, but the context is about a general preference. Using 'prefer' in the present simple tense is more appropriate here to express habitual or general preference.

× I would prefer dry weather because I found it, umm, at wet weather. It's kind of inconvenient for transporting as as always, gonna be traffic jam.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I find wet weather kind of inconvenient for transportation, as there is always going to be a traffic jam.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. 'I found it, umm, at wet weather' is unclear and incorrect; 'I find wet weather' is correct. 'Inconvenient for transporting' should be 'inconvenient for transportation'. 'As as always, gonna be traffic jam' is informal and ungrammatical; it should be 'as there is always going to be a traffic jam'.

× Oh yes, I always checking the weather forecast. For example if Monday I have to go to school I will check it on Saturday or the night before. So I always check it out like every day.

✓ Oh yes, I always check the weather forecast. For example, if I have to go to school on Monday, I will check it on Saturday or the night before. So I check it every day.

'I always checking' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I always check' (present simple tense). The phrase 'if Monday I have to go to school' is awkward; it should be 'if I have to go to school on Monday'. 'I always check it out like every day' is informal and redundant; 'I check it every day' is clearer and more appropriate.

× The effect of climate change is due to the CO2 emission which is kind of bad and the CO2 emission is to unlock which will increase the sea level arise and also acidification of sea which means umm it will contribute to of sea coral dye.

✓ The effects of climate change are due to CO2 emissions, which are harmful. The increase in CO2 causes sea levels to rise and also leads to ocean acidification, which contributes to coral dying.

The original sentence has multiple structural and grammatical errors. 'The effect' should be plural 'effects' as multiple impacts are discussed. 'CO2 emission' should be plural 'emissions'. 'Is to unlock' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'causes'. 'Sea level arise' should be 'sea levels to rise'. 'Acidification of sea' should be 'ocean acidification'. 'Contribute to of sea coral dye' is incorrect; it should be 'contributes to coral dying'.

× I found out I really enjoy living in Australia with the city Sydney because the climate is just feel is feel great and it's very refreshing and the air is pretty good. The quality of the air is very good and I like the style of the building.

✓ I have found that I really enjoy living in Sydney, Australia because the climate feels great, it is very refreshing, and the air quality is very good. I also like the style of the buildings.

'I found out' is better expressed as 'I have found' to indicate a present perfect experience. 'With the city Sydney' is awkward; 'in Sydney, Australia' is clearer. 'The climate is just feel is feel great' is ungrammatical; 'the climate feels great' is correct. 'The air is pretty good' and 'The quality of the air is very good' are repetitive; combining them improves clarity. 'Style of the building' should be plural 'buildings' to match general reference.