Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇描述天气。

Ejemplo: I live in Shanghai, and during summer, the weather is usually hot and sunny with high temperatures.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用简单句表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I am very sensitive to heat. In winter, I can tolerate the cold and don't need an air conditioner, but in summer, I feel very uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较为具体，但存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议注意介词和词汇搭配的正确使用。

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because I am allergic to high humidity. When the humidity is too high, I feel uncomfortable and my allergies worsen.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议完整回答问题，避免语法错误，并清晰说明习惯和原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning because I go to campus and dislike rainy days.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语填充词。

Ejemplo: I think climate change has caused global warming. For example, icebergs are melting, and temperatures have increased in recent years.

Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误，建议使用更自然的表达方式和正确的介词搭配。

Ejemplo: No, I prefer not to visit cities with different climates because I am used to the temperature and humidity in Shanghai. I find it hard to adapt to new weather conditions.

× I live in Shanghai and now it's the hot summer so the weather is always sunny and quite hot with high temperature which could melt the ice immediately on.

✓ I live in Shanghai and now it's the hot summer, so the weather is always sunny and quite hot with high temperatures which could melt the ice immediately.

这里的“temperature”应使用复数形式“temperatures”，因为指的是多次或多种高温情况。英语中表示多次或多种的名词应使用复数形式。

× I prefer cold weather because I'm such a person that extremely afraid of heat, so I could bear the coldness in winter and I even don't need a air conditioner.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I'm such a person who is extremely afraid of heat, so I can bear the coldness in winter and I even don't need an air conditioner.

“could”在这里表示过去或假设，语境应使用表示能力的“can”。另外，“a air conditioner”中的冠词应为“an”，因为“air”以元音音素开头。

× But in summer I felt I feel especially hot and couldn't bear the.

✓ But in summer I feel especially hot and can't bear it.

句子时态应保持一致，描述现在的感受应使用一般现在时“feel”，而非过去时“felt”。“couldn't bear the”不完整，应补充宾语“it”。

× I prefer dry weather because I am allergic with high humidity weather and when humanity is too high I will feel uncomfortable and easy to be allergic.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I am allergic to high humidity weather and when humidity is too high I will feel uncomfortable and easily get allergic reactions.

“allergic”后应接介词“to”表示对某物过敏。“humanity”应为“humidity”，表示湿度。表达“容易过敏”应使用“easily get allergic reactions”更准确。

× Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast and I check them in the morning almost every day because I usually write to our campus so I extremely hate the rainy weather.

✓ Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast and I check it in the morning almost every day because I usually walk to our campus so I extremely hate rainy weather.

“weather forecast”是单数，代词应为“it”。“write to our campus”应为“walk to our campus”，语义更合理。

× When it rains, I need to go to.

✓ When it rains, I need to take an umbrella.

原句不完整，缺少宾语，导致句子结构错误。应补充完整表达。

× Umm I think it is the umm global warmth. For example, the icebergs are melting so the temperature are higher in recent years which caused the global warms.

✓ Umm I think it is global warming. For example, the icebergs are melting so the temperatures are higher in recent years which cause global warming.

“global warmth”应为“global warming”，是固定搭配。主语“temperatures”应为复数，谓语动词与主语一致用“are”。“which caused”时态应与前文保持一致，改为“which cause”。

× No, I wouldn't like to visit other cities that have different climates because I'm quite familiar to the temperature and humidity in my city, which is Shanghai. When the conditions change, I will feel not adaptable.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to visit other cities that have different climates because I'm quite familiar with the temperature and humidity in my city, which is Shanghai. When the conditions change, I will feel uncomfortable and not adaptable.

“familiar”后应接介词“with”而非“to”。“feel not adaptable”表达不自然，应改为“feel uncomfortable and not adaptable”。