Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'where our weather's are used to be cold and less tireful,' say 'where the weather is usually cold and less tiring.' Also, mention all seasons clearly and use proper sentence structures.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live varies with the seasons. From January to March, we experience winter, which is usually cold and refreshing. Then, from April to June, it becomes hot and humid. Finally, from July to September, we have the rainy season with frequent showers.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity and naturalness. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to explain reasons. Avoid repetitive phrases like 'I know winters.' Instead, say 'I prefer cold weather because...'.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel less tired and more productive. For instance, I enjoy having a cup of coffee in the cool breeze. Also, sleeping during winter is peaceful and helps me feel more energetic compared to hot weather.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence fluency and clarity. Avoid fragmented sentences like 'But recently.' Use linking words such as 'however' or 'although' to contrast ideas. Also, be specific about the time frame and reasons.

Ejemplo: I used to prefer wet weather over dry. However, in the past two to three years, I developed a skin infection due to the humid climate. Since then, I prefer dry weather because it is better for my skin.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid awkward phrases like 'heavy chill.' Use linking words to explain changes in habits. For example, 'I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but recently, because I have to go to work every day during the rainy season, I have started checking it more often.'

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily. However, since I have to go to work every day and the rainy season causes frequent changes, I have started checking it more often nowadays.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence clarity and completeness. Use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences like 'Like in India we have so much hot in.' Instead, say 'For example, in India, temperatures have become much hotter than before.'

Ejemplo: I believe the effects of climate change are visible worldwide because of global warming and the greenhouse effect. For example, in India, temperatures have become much hotter than in the past, which affects agriculture and daily life.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'their climats' and 'make over environmental change.' Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, 'I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience new seasons and cultures because it can be refreshing and energizing.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience their unique seasons and traditions. I think such travel would be refreshing and help me feel more energetic.

× From January to March we have winter seasons where our weather's are used to be cold and less tireful.

✓ From January to March we have the winter season where our weather used to be cold and less tiring.

The word 'seasons' should be singular 'season' because it refers to one continuous period. 'Weather's' is incorrect; it should be 'weather'. 'Used to be' is correct but 'less tireful' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'less tiring' to describe the weather causing less fatigue.

× After that from April to June it's very hot and humid and from July to September rainy season.

✓ After that, from April to June it's very hot and humid, and from July to September is the rainy season.

The phrase 'rainy season' needs the verb 'is' to complete the sentence. Also, 'rainy season' is singular and should be preceded by 'the' to specify the season.

× Winters makes me less tireful and makes my time more effective.

✓ Winter makes me less tired and makes my time more effective.

'Winters' is plural but the verb 'makes' is singular; either use singular 'Winter makes' or plural 'Winters make'. Also, 'tireful' is not a correct adjective; 'tired' is appropriate here.

× I know to have a cup of coffee in those cold breeze.

✓ I like to have a cup of coffee in that cold breeze.

The phrase 'I know to have' is incorrect; 'I like to have' or 'I enjoy having' is appropriate. Also, 'those cold breeze' is incorrect; 'breeze' is singular, so 'that cold breeze' is correct.

× Even sleeping in winters is very peaceful and makes us more energetic than hot weather.

✓ Even sleeping in winter is very peaceful and makes us more energetic than in hot weather.

'Winters' should be singular 'winter' when referring to the season in general. Also, adding 'in' before 'hot weather' improves clarity.

× Since 2:00 2-3 years I used to have a skin infection because of the humid climate.

✓ For the past 2-3 years, I have had a skin infection because of the humid climate.

'Used to have' implies a past habit that no longer exists, but the sentence suggests a condition continuing until now, so present perfect 'have had' is appropriate. Also, 'Since 2:00 2-3 years' is incorrect; 'For the past 2-3 years' is correct.

× From that onwards I don't like humid and wet climates much more and I used to prefer dry more now.

✓ From then onwards, I don't like humid and wet climates much anymore and I now prefer dry weather.

'Used to prefer' implies past habit; since preference is current, 'prefer' is correct. 'Much more' is incorrect; 'much anymore' or 'anymore' fits better. Also, 'dry more' is awkward; 'prefer dry weather' is clearer.

× I am not very much heavy chill of checking the weather forecast daily, but recently I have to go to job daily.

✓ I am not very keen on checking the weather forecast daily, but recently I have to go to work daily.

'Heavy chill' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keen on' to express interest. 'Go to job' should be 'go to work'.

× So I used to check it nowadays as it is a rainy season and it changes more frequently so.

✓ So I check it nowadays as it is the rainy season and the weather changes more frequently.

'Used to check' implies past habit; 'check' is correct for current habit. 'Rainy season' needs 'the'. The sentence ending with 'so' is incomplete; rephrased for clarity.

× Climate changes are regularly changing from the normal ones.

✓ Climate is regularly changing from the normal patterns.

'Climate changes' is plural but awkward; 'Climate' as a singular noun is better. 'Changing from the normal ones' is unclear; 'changing from the normal patterns' is clearer.

× Like in India we have so much hot in.

✓ For example, in India, it is very hot.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Rephrased to a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× I would love to visit different cities with different climates to experience their seasons, their traditions, their climats.

✓ I would love to visit different cities with different climates to experience their seasons, their traditions, and their climates.

'Climats' is a misspelling; the correct plural is 'climates'. Also, added 'and' before the last item for correct list structure.

× I think it will be very peaceful and it will make over environmental change, which is also helpful in making us more energetic.

✓ I think it will be very peaceful and it will bring about environmental change, which is also helpful in making us more energetic.

'Make over environmental change' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring about environmental change' to indicate causing change.