Part 1
Examinador
What's the weather like where you live?
Candidato
In my country the weather is really hot in humid during the summer from June to September. So I don't really go outside in summer because it make me feel unconfortable. Ann is salted because it's really hot.
Examinador
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Candidato
For me, I riffle cold weather because it had may feel confortable when I I. I really like where long coast like hot days are swifter so. Call weather is a ideal weather for me.
Examinador
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Candidato
Well, I refurb ride weather because what weather is very homemade an inconvenient I don't like because I like we're long cost if the weather is wet is very convenient in. Wet, so I refer dry weather because it's better for my skin.
Examinador
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Candidato
Honestly, I'm not a people whose usually checking the weather forecast. Because I just. Uh, I just, if I wanna go outside, I just go and I don't, I don't care about the weather forecast too much.
Examinador
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Candidato
Well, in my opinion, the coming change in recent years bring. A lot of disadvantages, like the. Like the animals don't have enough habitat to live in. The weather is more hot Ann is make people feel unconfortable.
Examinador
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Candidato
Given away yes I am a big fan of traveling so I enjoy me something other countries that have different commissions where I lived for assemble I really in my country I do really like go to Dallas city because the weather in that lake is really cold in confortable.
What's the weather like where you live?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "Ann is salted", bạn nên nói "And it is so hot". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác như "humid" thay vì "in humid".
Ejemplo: In my country, the weather is really hot and humid during the summer from June to September. Because of this, I usually avoid going outside as it makes me feel uncomfortable. And it is so hot that it affects daily activities.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi chính tả như "riffle" nên là "prefer", "call" nên là "cold". Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời có tính liên kết.
Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable to me. I especially like places with long coasts where hot days are cooler. So, cold weather is ideal for me.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Tránh dùng từ không đúng như "refurb ride" nên là "prefer dry" và "homemade" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, có liên kết logic.
Ejemplo: Well, I prefer dry weather because wet weather is inconvenient for me. I like places with long coasts, and dry weather is better for my skin.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I'm not a people whose usually checking", bạn nên nói "I'm not the type of person who usually checks". Hãy nói rõ tần suất và thói quen của bạn.
Ejemplo: Honestly, I'm not the type of person who usually checks the weather forecast. If I want to go outside, I just go without paying much attention to the forecast.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, "coming change" nên là "climate change", "more hot" nên là "hotter". Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính liên kết và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.
Ejemplo: Well, in my opinion, climate change in recent years has brought many disadvantages. For example, animals don't have enough habitats to live in, and the weather has become hotter, which makes people feel uncomfortable.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng từ sai như "commissions" nên là "climates", "assemble" nên là "example". Hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, có liên kết và rõ ràng.
Ejemplo: Definitely yes, I am a big fan of traveling. I enjoy visiting other countries that have different climates from where I live. For example, I really like going to Dallas city because the weather there is really cold and comfortable.
× In my country the weather is really hot in humid during the summer from June to September.
✓ In my country the weather is really hot and humid during the summer from June to September.
The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'humid'. The correct conjunction to connect two adjectives describing the weather is 'and'.
× So I don't really go outside in summer because it make me feel unconfortable.
✓ So I don't really go outside in summer because it makes me feel uncomfortable.
The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'. The correct form is 'makes'. Also, 'unconfortable' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'uncomfortable'.
× Ann is salted because it's really hot.
✓ And I feel salted because it's really hot.
The word 'Ann' seems to be a typo for 'And I'. Also, 'salted' is incorrect in this context; possibly the intended word is 'salty' or 'sweaty'. However, since the meaning is unclear, the correction assumes 'And I feel salted' is intended, but this sentence is unclear and may need rephrasing.
× For me, I riffle cold weather because it had may feel confortable when I I.
✓ For me, I prefer cold weather because it may feel comfortable when I am.
'Riffle' is a misspelling of 'prefer'. 'Had may feel' is incorrect; 'may feel' is correct. The phrase 'when I I' is incomplete; it should be 'when I am'. Also, 'confortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'comfortable'.
× I really like where long coast like hot days are swifter so.
✓ I really like where long coastlines have hot days that are cooler, so.
The phrase 'where long coast like hot days are swifter' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Swifter' is not appropriate to describe weather; 'cooler' or 'breezier' would be better. Also, 'long coast' should be 'long coastlines'.
× Call weather is a ideal weather for me.
✓ Cold weather is an ideal weather for me.
'Call' is a misspelling of 'Cold'. The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound should be 'an'.
× Well, I refurb ride weather because what weather is very homemade an inconvenient I don't like because I like we're long cost if the weather is wet is very convenient in.
✓ Well, I prefer dry weather because wet weather is very humid and inconvenient. I don't like it because I like warm long coastlines. If the weather is wet, it is very inconvenient.
Many words are misspelled or misused: 'refurb' should be 'prefer', 'ride' should be 'dry', 'what' should be 'wet', 'homemade' should be 'humid', 'an' should be 'and', 'we're' should be 'warm', 'cost' should be 'coast'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.
× Wet, so I refer dry weather because it's better for my skin.
✓ So, I prefer dry weather because it's better for my skin.
'Refer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer'.
× Honestly, I'm not a people whose usually checking the weather forecast.
✓ Honestly, I'm not a person who usually checks the weather forecast.
'People' is plural; 'person' is singular. 'Whose' is incorrect; 'who' is correct. 'Usually checking' should be 'usually checks' to match subject-verb agreement.
× Because I just. Uh, I just, if I wanna go outside, I just go and I don't, I don't care about the weather forecast too much.
✓ Because I just, uh, if I want to go outside, I just go and I don't care about the weather forecast too much.
The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Wanna' should be 'want to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and fluency.
× Well, in my opinion, the coming change in recent years bring.
✓ Well, in my opinion, the climate change in recent years has brought.
'Coming change' is incorrect; 'climate change' is correct. 'Bring' should be in present perfect tense 'has brought' to indicate recent effects.
× A lot of disadvantages, like the. Like the animals don't have enough habitat to live in.
✓ A lot of disadvantages, like the animals don't have enough habitats to live in.
'Habitat' should be plural 'habitats' because it refers to multiple animals needing multiple living spaces.
× The weather is more hot Ann is make people feel unconfortable.
✓ The weather is hotter and it makes people feel uncomfortable.
'More hot' should be 'hotter' (comparative adjective). 'Ann' is a typo for 'and'. 'Is make' is incorrect; correct form is 'makes'. 'Unconfortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'uncomfortable'.
× Given away yes I am a big fan of traveling so I enjoy me something other countries that have different commissions where I lived for assemble I really in my country I do really like go to Dallas city because the weather in that lake is really cold in confortable.
✓ Anyway, yes, I am a big fan of traveling so I enjoy visiting other countries that have different climates from where I live. For example, in my country, I really like to go to Dallas city because the weather there is really cold and comfortable.
Many words are misspelled or misused: 'Given away' should be 'Anyway', 'enjoy me something' should be 'enjoy visiting', 'commissions' should be 'climates', 'assemble' should be 'example', 'in that lake' should be 'there', 'in confortable' should be 'and comfortable'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.