Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear words like 'stammer' and focus on correct grammar and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: I live in Astana, the capital of Kazakhstan. The weather there is quite extreme, with very cold winters and hot summers. I find the climate quite challenging to adapt to.

Sugerencia: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons using linking words.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer cold weather because I can't stand the heat and sweating during summer. Therefore, I dislike summer and would rather choose cold winters instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because I have been to Thailand, where the summers are very wet and humid. I found it hard to tolerate the humidity and needed air conditioning all the time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, I do check it sometimes in summer and winter, especially when I can't see outside and want to know the weather conditions.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I have definitely experienced climate change myself. When I was younger, winters were colder and summers were cooler, but now it seems like every year the weather is getting hotter.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy traveling and would love to experience the weather in other cities. This would help me broaden my understanding of how climates vary across different parts of my country.

× So we have a very cold winters and hot summers, 2 and I would say that climate and weather day is really tough.

✓ So we have very cold winters and hot summers, and I would say that the climate and weather here are really tough.

The word 'winters' is plural, so 'a very cold winters' is incorrect; 'a' should be removed. Also, 'climate and weather day is' is incorrect because 'climate and weather' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Additionally, 'weather day' seems to be a mistake; it should be 'weather here'.

× Definitely cold weather because I just can't stand the heart and the feeling of you, you sweating in the summer.

✓ Definitely cold weather because I just can't stand the heat and the feeling of sweating in the summer.

The word 'heart' is a misspelling of 'heat'. Also, 'the feeling of you, you sweating' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'the feeling of sweating'.

× Definitely drivers are because I have been to Thailand and the climate here and summer there is really, really wet and I couldn't stand a day in there.

✓ Definitely drier weather because I have been to Thailand and the climate there in summer is really, really wet and I couldn't stand a day there.

'Drivers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'drier' (comparative adjective). Also, 'the climate here and summer there' is confusing; it should be 'the climate there in summer'. 'In there' is incorrect; 'there' suffices.

× I couldn't live without the air conditioner because I had I used to our gold dry.

✓ I couldn't live without the air conditioner because I am used to our cold, dry weather.

The phrase 'I had I used to our gold dry' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I am used to our cold, dry weather'. 'Used to' requires the preposition 'to' followed by a noun or noun phrase.

× Well, I don't have a habit of checking whether. Also I check. It's usually in summer and in the winter when I can't. When I can't see outside winter and understand how the weather is like outside.

✓ Well, I don't have a habit of checking the weather. I usually check it in summer and winter when I can't see outside and understand what the weather is like outside.

'Checking whether' is incorrect; it should be 'checking the weather'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be combined and clarified. 'How the weather is like' is incorrect; it should be 'what the weather is like'.

× Well, I can say that I have definitely experiences the climate change myself because I remember that when I was much younger the winters were colder and summers were closer to and every year it seems like and felt like it's just getting hot.

✓ Well, I can say that I have definitely experienced climate change myself because I remember that when I was much younger the winters were colder and summers were warmer, and every year it seems and feels like it's just getting hotter.

'Have definitely experiences' is incorrect; the past participle 'experienced' should be used. 'Summers were closer to' is unclear; likely intended 'warmer'. 'Seems like and felt like' should be 'seems and feels like'. Verb tenses need to be consistent.

× Yes, of course I like traveling and I would be really grateful to just experience some how's the weather is like in other cities and just have wider range of my view of how the climate is different in every city of my country.

✓ Yes, of course I like traveling and I would be really grateful to just experience how the weather is like in other cities and have a wider range of views on how the climate is different in every city of my country.

'Some how's the weather is like' is incorrect; it should be 'how the weather is like'. 'Wider range of my view' is awkward; 'wider range of views' is better. Prepositions and pronouns need correction for clarity.