Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and grammatically correct description of the weather. Use simple sentences and correct word forms, for example, say 'It is very hot and humid in my city.' Avoid redundancy and incorrect grammar.

Ejemplo: I live in Jalandhar, where the weather is usually very hot and humid, especially during the summer months.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, use 'comfortable' instead of 'convertible' and 'outdoors' instead of 'outdoor'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and refreshing. There is less humidity, so it is easier to spend time outside. Also, during cold mornings, the sunrise looks very beautiful, which I really enjoy.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear and correct sentences. Use proper grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and causes sweating.' Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and causes my skin to sweat, which I do not like.

Sugerencia: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially during the monsoon season, to prepare for rain or thunderstorms.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, especially during the monsoon season, so I can be ready for rain or thunderstorms.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas simply and clearly. For example, say 'Climate change has caused more frequent thunderstorms and changes in the rainy season in recent years.'

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused more frequent thunderstorms and changes in the rainy season in recent years.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates, such as places with monsoon, dry, or cold weather.' Avoid unclear words and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates, such as monsoon areas, dry regions, and cold places.

× Oh I'm living in Jalandhar and my in my city have very hott and humidity.

✓ Oh, I live in Jalandhar and my city has very hot weather and humidity.

The phrase 'I'm living' is incorrect for a permanent situation; 'I live' is appropriate. 'My in my city' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'my city'. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'city'. 'Hott' is a spelling error; correct spelling is 'hot'. Also, 'humidity' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'and' to connect with 'hot weather'.

× my in my city have very hott and humidity.

✓ my city has very hot weather and humidity.

The subject 'city' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.

× my in my city have very hott and humidity.

✓ my city has very hot weather and humidity.

The word 'hott' is a misspelling of 'hot'. Also, 'humidity' is a noun and should be used correctly with 'and'.

× I prefer cold better because I find it more convertible and refreshing.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing.

The word 'convertible' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'comfortable'. Also, 'prefer cold better' is redundant; 'prefer cold weather' suffices.

× I prefer cold better because I find it more convertible and refreshing.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing.

'Convertible' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'.

× There is less humidity which makes it easier to spend time.

✓ There is less humidity, which makes it easier to spend time outdoors.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'outdoors' to clarify where it is easier to spend time.

× Outdoor also during the cold morning, the sunrise look very beautiful which I really enjoy.

✓ Also, during cold mornings outdoors, the sunrise looks very beautiful, which I really enjoy.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'Outdoor also' should be 'Also, during cold mornings outdoors'. 'Look' should be 'looks' to agree with singular subject 'sunrise'.

× the sunrise look very beautiful which I really enjoy.

✓ the sunrise looks very beautiful, which I really enjoy.

The subject 'sunrise' is singular, so the verb should be 'looks' not 'look'.

× I preferred dry weather becauses in vet we have very uncomfortable feeling and we we can't comfort in this bed better.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather we feel very uncomfortable and we can't be comfortable in this bad weather.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context is present preference; 'prefer' is correct. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Vet' should be 'wet'. 'Comfort' is a verb but used incorrectly; 'be comfortable' is correct. 'Bed better' is unclear; likely meant 'bad weather'.

× I preferred dry weather becauses in vet we have very uncomfortable feeling and we we can't comfort in this bed better.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather we feel very uncomfortable and we can't be comfortable in this bad weather.

Prepositions 'in vet' should be 'in wet weather'. 'In this bed better' is incorrect; should be 'in this bad weather'.

× But I love and I preferred to dry weather be 'cause they're dry skins and then do not wetting.

✓ But I love and prefer dry weather because it keeps the skin dry and prevents sweating.

'Preferred to dry weather be' is incorrect; should be 'prefer dry weather'. 'They're dry skins' is incorrect pronoun use; 'it keeps the skin dry' is correct. 'Do not wetting' is incorrect verb form; 'prevents sweating' is correct.

× They know though don't come in skin sweating.

✓ It does not cause sweating on the skin.

'They know though don't come in skin sweating' is unclear and incorrect pronoun use. The intended meaning is that dry weather does not cause sweating.

× Yes I checked king the weather is my habit because I can re searching for weather when they have friends season monsoon.

✓ Yes, checking the weather is my habit because I can research the weather during the monsoon season.

'Checked king' is incorrect; should be 'checking'. 'Re searching' should be 'research'. 'Friends season monsoon' is incorrect; should be 'monsoon season'.

× And like come weather and like a thunderstorm.

✓ And like weather such as thunderstorms.

The phrase 'like come weather' is incorrect; 'weather such as' is appropriate. 'Thunderstorm' should be plural 'thunderstorms' to match context.

× Yes, they have many affected in this climate in recent Arabic, 'cause the former have not. Doing the work.

✓ Yes, there have been many effects on the climate in recent years because the government has not been doing enough work.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'They have many affected' should be 'there have been many effects'. 'Recent Arabic' is incorrect; likely meant 'recent years'. 'Former have not doing the work' should be 'government has not been doing enough work'.

× About this monsoon, they have many thunderstorms, Ann. Rainy season.

✓ During this monsoon, there are many thunderstorms and a rainy season.

'About this monsoon' should be 'During this monsoon'. 'They have many thunderstorms' should be 'there are many thunderstorms'. 'Ann.' is unclear and likely a typo.

× Vinay. Visit in other city they have many different types of climates like some cities are like monsoon, some cities are like wet and dry and some cities are cold weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have many different types of climates, such as monsoon, wet and dry, and cold weather climates.

The sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Vinay.' is unclear. 'Visit in other city' should be 'I would like to visit other cities'. 'Some cities are like monsoon' should be 'such as monsoon climates'.