Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to use simple and correct sentences to describe the weather clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is mostly mild and pleasant throughout the year. For example, summers are warm but not too hot, which makes outdoor activities enjoyable. In winter, the temperature is cool and comfortable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words and grammar mistakes. Use clear vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I can wear light and comfortable clothes. Also, I enjoy walking outside in the summer, which gives me good energy and happiness.

Sugerencia: Your answer has incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Try to give a clear reason and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because in our developing country, wet weather makes it difficult to walk and drive. Therefore, dry weather is more comfortable for daily activities.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammar errors. Use simple sentences to express your habits clearly and add linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I do not have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I usually go out without checking it because I am used to the weather in my area.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to explain the effects of climate change with specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I think one of the main effects of climate change in recent years is increased pollution. As the population grows, pollution rises, which causes changes in the environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your reasons and give examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. For example, I want to visit Korea to enjoy the snowfall and experience its cold weather and beautiful scenery.

× The weather where I live generally is milk and pleasant throughout the year.

✓ The weather where I live generally is mild and pleasant throughout the year.

The word 'milk' is incorrect here; the correct adjective to describe moderate weather is 'mild'. This is a vocabulary error affecting adjective use.

× For example, a summer is 1 but not that hard, excessively hard that makes the outdoor activities.

✓ For example, summer is mild but not excessively hot, which makes outdoor activities enjoyable.

The article 'a' before 'summer' is incorrect because 'summer' is an uncountable noun when referring to the season in general. Also, the sentence structure and word choice needed correction for clarity.

× Normal and in winter. It's. Boat.

✓ It is normal in winter and quite cold.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into a complete sentence with proper subject and predicate.

× I personally river hard weather because I love to wear light and comfortable quote.

✓ I personally prefer hot weather because I love to wear light and comfortable clothes.

'River' is a misused word; the intended word is 'prefer'. Also, 'quote' is incorrect; the correct word is 'clothes'. Pronoun and word choice errors are present.

× It's like swords and happines and I love to walk around an Watsons it in the summer and it gives me good energy.

✓ It's like warmth and happiness, and I love to walk around in the sunshine in the summer; it gives me good energy.

Words 'swords' and 'Watsons' are incorrect; likely intended 'warmth' and 'sunshine'. Also, sentence structure needed improvement for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather because. As our country is. Developing country an do to drive whether it's hard for us to walk and to drive an it. Makes comfort level when it's dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because our country is developing, and during wet weather, it's hard for us to walk and drive. It is more comfortable when it's dry.

Incorrect use of prepositions and sentence fragments made the sentence unclear. Correct prepositions and conjunctions improve meaning.

× To be honest, I'm not. I don't have a habit of taking the weather forecast, being use it normally workout without checking any weather forecast.

✓ To be honest, I'm not. I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast; I usually go about my day without checking it.

'Taking the weather forecast' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'checking the weather forecast'. Also, 'being use it normally workout' is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× I think effects of climate change in recent years are the main problem is the pollution.

✓ I think the main effect of climate change in recent years is pollution.

The original sentence is awkward and redundant. It needs restructuring to clearly express the main idea.

× Pollution is increasing highly as increasing the population an it's. Changing an.

✓ Pollution is increasing rapidly as the population grows, and it is causing changes.

Incorrect word choice and incomplete sentences; 'highly' should be 'rapidly', and sentence fragments corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I love to visit under the city. It was our different climates from my. Place is the Korea as I want to enjoy the snow fall and is known as the cold. Weather, country and beautiful scene.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different climates from my place, like Korea, because I want to enjoy the snowfall. It is known as a cold weather country with beautiful scenery.

Incorrect pronouns and sentence fragments made the original unclear. Correct pronouns and sentence restructuring improve clarity and grammar.