Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and precise. Give a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and add one supporting reason or example. Keep it under 5 sentences and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a bit, mainly poetry. I enjoy expressing emotions and ideas through short verses because they help me process my thoughts and relax.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer with a clear structure: state the main types you write, then give reasons or examples. Remove hesitations and unfinished fragments.

Ejemplo: I mainly write work-related notes and occasional poems. For work I record tasks and decisions to stay organized, and for poetry I jot down phrases that capture moods or memorable lines.

Sugerencia: Make the response coherent and logical. Start with a direct answer about whether your writing will change, then explain how and why with specific examples and linking words (e.g., however, because). Reduce filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change. At the moment I mainly write reports and meeting notes for work, but in the future I hope to write more poems and creative pieces because I want to explore personal expression outside my job.

Sugerencia: Good clear preference; improve grammar and coherence. Use one or two supporting reasons linked logically, and finish sentences completely. Replace vague phrases with specific descriptions.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because the act of writing with a pen helps me relax and creates a peaceful atmosphere. Also, I find I can concentrate better and remember things more easily when I write by hand.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer about frequency, avoid negative or unclear phrasing, and finish your thought. Then add a brief detail or comparison about the past vs present.

Ejemplo: I don't keep a diary regularly now because I'm usually very busy with work. However, I used to write regularly as a child when I had more free time and wanted to record my daily experiences.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. State the method clearly, then give a reason or brief example. Avoid unclear fragments (e.g., 'the SH').

Ejemplo: I usually use my smartphone to take photos and short videos to record daily moments. I often share some of these on social media to keep memories and stay connected with friends.

× Yes, I enjoy writing poetry, especially, uh, from my favorite poem lead by.

✓ Yes, I enjoy writing poetry, especially inspired by my favorite poems.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear ('from my favorite poem lead by' is fragmented). This is a sentence structure issue: words are out of order and missing connectors. Use 'inspired by' to express influence and plural 'poems' or keep singular consistently; here 'poems' fits the general statement. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I usually write notes from my work and sometimes, MMM, I enjoy writing poetry.

✓ I usually write notes for my work and sometimes I enjoy writing poetry.

The phrase 'notes from my work' is odd; 'notes for my work' or 'at work' is correct. This is a sentence structure/preposition choice issue (11 and 26), but per instruction we correct only types from the provided list — primarily sentence structure. Remove filler sounds and extra commas to make it grammatical and natural.

× Uh, those well known lines from.

✓ I like well-known lines from poems I admire.

The fragment 'those well known lines from.' lacks an object and verb. This is a sentence structure error. Complete the thought by specifying what the lines are from and add a verb. Hyphenate 'well-known' as a compound adjective.

× Yes, nowadays I usually write uh materials for work, such as reports and uh.

✓ Yes, nowadays I usually write materials for work, such as reports.

The original has filler and an unfinished clause. Tense 'nowadays' requires present simple — 'write' is correct; remove extraneous 'uh' and trailing 'and uh'. This is a present tense/ sentence completeness issue.

× Important notes are from meetings.

✓ Important notes come from meetings.

'Are from' is grammatically acceptable but awkward. Replacing with 'come from' makes the sentence more natural. This addresses sentence structure and natural usage.

× However, I think I will write poems.

✓ However, I think I will write poems in the future.

The original is grammatically acceptable, but adding 'in the future' clarifies timing. Identified as future tense; ensure tense matches the question about whether writing will change.

× I prefer handwriting because I like the atmosphere and makes me feel peaceful and.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I like the atmosphere; it makes me feel peaceful.

Missing subject for the verb 'makes' causes a pronoun/subject omission error. Replace with 'it' to refer to handwriting or the atmosphere. Also remove trailing 'and' and combine clauses properly.

× I can concentrate more when I use pens.

✓ I can concentrate better when I use a pen.

'Concentrate more' is understandable but 'concentrate better' is more natural (adverb use). Use singular 'a pen' or 'pens' consistently; here 'a pen' sounds natural. This addresses adverb/adjective usage and present tense clarity.

× No, now at this moment, I don't like any, uh, daily because I, uh, usually am busy at work.

✓ No, at the moment I don't keep a daily diary because I am usually busy at work.

Original uses 'any daily' which is incorrect. This is an issue with quantifiers/article use and sentence structure. 'Keep a daily diary' is the correct collocation. Remove filler words and fix word order ('at the moment').

× However, when I was a child, I.

✓ However, when I was a child, I used to keep a diary.

Original is an incomplete sentence and lacks a verb phrase. This is a past tense/ sentence completeness issue. Use 'used to' to indicate past habitual action.

× For daily life, I enjoy capturing the beautiful moments using my a cell phone and the SH share it to the social media.

✓ In daily life, I enjoy capturing beautiful moments with my cell phone and sharing them on social media.

Multiple errors: wrong prepositions ('for daily life' -> 'in daily life'), extra article 'a' before 'cell phone', awkward 'the SH share it to the social media'. Correct prepositions are 'with' and 'on', and use plural 'them' to match 'moments'. This addresses preposition and pronoun reference errors.