Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (use present simple for habitual actions), and give one specific reason. Avoid redundant or unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write every day. I keep a diary to record my daily activities and memorable moments from life in Africa because it helps me reflect and remember important experiences.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, organize supporting details with linking words, and use accurate vocabulary. Be specific about examples (feelings, events, politics) and avoid repetitions.

Ejemplo: I mainly write about my daily activities and personal thoughts. For example, I describe how I feel, my awareness about social or economic issues, and interesting events in my neighborhood, because writing helps me process my ideas and keep a record.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether your writing changes over time, then give one or two specific examples. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'research documentation', 'social impact of extractivism') and avoid hesitation.

Ejemplo: Yes, my writing changes depending on its purpose. For personal diaries I write casually, but when I work on research documentation or articles about the social impact of extractivism in developing countries, I use a formal tone and more precise evidence.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference and give a brief reason plus a contrasting example. Use correct sentence structure and linking words to compare forms.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing for long texts because it's faster and easier to edit. However, I usually handwrite notes after a discussion because writing by hand helps me remember important points.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer about frequency (daily, weekly) and then a concise supporting detail about how long you've kept diaries. Correct tense and phrasing, and avoid unclear metaphors.

Ejemplo: I write in my diary almost every day. I started keeping diaries in elementary school and have kept them ever since; I still store the old notebooks in a wardrobe at home.

Sugerencia: Answer directly naming other methods (notes, photos, voice memos) and explain briefly how you use them. Use linking words and clear phrasing.

Ejemplo: Besides diaries, I use short keyword notes on my phone to capture quick ideas, and sometimes I take photos or voice memos so I can expand them into full diary entries later.

× Yes, I rather I'm writing every day because I like to write in a diary book.

✓ Yes, I write every day because I like to write in a diary.

The student used 'I'm writing' with 'rather' awkwardly; present simple 'I write' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also 'rather' is unnecessary here. Simplify to 'I write every day'. Use 'diary' not 'diary book' for natural English.

× I like to documentate all the activity that I do in Africa life.

✓ I like to document all the activities I do in my life in Africa.

Use the correct verb 'document' instead of nonstandard 'documentate'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'all'. 'Africa life' is unnatural; reorder to 'my life in Africa'. This fixes word choice, plurality and word order.

× It's such amazing one.

✓ It's amazing.

'Such amazing one' is ungrammatical. Use 'It's amazing' or 'It's such an amazing experience'. If keeping 'such', include an article and noun: 'such an amazing experience'.

× I used to ride the daily activity that I do in my daily life, especially what I feel about the conditions of myself, myself awareness or political or economic context, environment.

✓ I write about my daily activities, especially how I feel about my personal condition, self-awareness, and the political or economic environment.

'Used to ride' is incorrect; 'write' fits the current habit. 'Daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities'. 'Conditions of myself' and 'myself awareness' are incorrect; use 'my personal condition' and 'self-awareness'. Clean up word order and use consistent present tense for habitual action.

× So I write it in my diary because I would like to document it.

✓ So I write them in my diary because I would like to document them.

Pronoun 'it' refers to plural 'activities' or multiple things; use plural pronoun 'them'. Maintain consistency between the noun and pronoun number.

× If I write something with purpose, such as I write something like, uh, research documentations or news or something best on the specific contact, like a social impact of the, uh, extractivism, social impact of the developing country.

✓ If I write with a purpose, I might write research documentation, news, or analyses on a specific topic, such as the social impact of extractivism in developing countries.

Fix sentence structure: 'write something with purpose' -> 'write with a purpose'. 'Research documentations' should be 'research documentation'. 'Something best on the specific contact' is unclear; use 'on a specific topic'. 'Extractivism' and 'developing country' need correct prepositions and plurality: 'in developing countries'.

× When I'm writing something that too long, I prefer to. Typing it through the laptop or tablet.

✓ When I'm writing something that is too long, I prefer to type it on a laptop or tablet.

Add the missing 'is' after 'that' for a clause: 'that is too long'. 'I prefer to. Typing it' is fragmented; combine into one sentence and use infinitive 'to type'. Use 'on a laptop' rather than 'through'.

× But actually if it's like the result of the discussion, I prefer to get handwriting.

✓ But if it is the result of a discussion, I prefer to handwrite it.

'Get handwriting' is unidiomatic; use 'handwrite it' or 'write it by hand'. Simplify 'if it's like the result of the discussion' to 'if it is the result of a discussion'.

× I began to write the daily life in my diary's books in science since in elementary school I kept it until now and I keep in my wardrobe in my home it might museum that I ever created.

✓ I began writing about my daily life in diaries when I was in elementary school; I have kept them until now and store them in my wardrobe at home; they are like a museum I created.

Use 'began writing' (gerund) rather than 'began to write the daily life'. 'Diary's books' is incorrect; use 'diaries'. 'In science' is incorrect contextually and removed. Use present perfect 'have kept' to indicate duration from past to present. Clarify storage 'in my wardrobe at home'. Rephrase 'it might museum that I ever created' to 'they are like a museum I created' for clarity.

× Many things or activities I do every day and I think that I can write it whole, but I know I take some note with the keywords so after it I can write it for so long in the writing.

✓ I do many things and activities every day and I think I could write about them in full, but I usually take notes with keywords so I can write more later.

Use 'many things and activities' in correct order. Match pronouns to plural 'them' not 'it'. 'Write it whole' is unnatural; use 'write about them in full'. 'Take some note' -> 'take notes'. 'So after it I can write it for so long in the writing' is awkward; rephrase to 'so I can write more later'.