Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer, more coherent and avoid errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'I write every day' is fine), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes — I write every day. I keep a small notebook at work and write down important points and figures by hand because it helps me remember details and stay productive. Also, I enjoy writing because it helps me organize my thoughts.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to add one or two specific examples. Fix unclear phrases ('date delays', 'key price', 'what do').

Ejemplo: I usually write notes from meetings. For example, I record the date, agenda items, deadlines and key figures so I can follow up later. This helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and has many grammar errors. Give a direct reason and one clear supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and avoid fragmented phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, they change almost every day because my priorities shift. For instance, some days I record meeting outcomes, while on other days I note personal errands or urgent tasks.

Sugerencia: Correct the vocabulary and remove irrelevant phrases. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then support it with reasons and one brief example. Avoid nonsense words ('Halloween', 'ice cream').

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I don't want to spend too much time looking at screens. Handwriting helps me concentrate and remember information better; for example, I take handwritten notes in meetings to stay focused.

Sugerencia: This is a clear, relevant answer. You can improve by adding a linking phrase and a brief specific example of the phone reminders to enrich the response.

Ejemplo: I don't keep a diary because my daily life is quite routine. Instead, I use phone reminders and calendar alerts for important tasks, such as meetings or bill payments.

Sugerencia: Good content and relevant vocabulary but correct minor errors and be more specific about platforms and purpose. Use a linking word and one concrete example of an event you photograph.

Ejemplo: I often take photos of important events and share them on platforms like WeChat or Facebook. For example, I post pictures from family gatherings to preserve memories and share them with friends.

× Yes, I write every day. I keep a notebook and work and I usually write down important price by hand because it helps me stay productive and remember important details.

✓ Yes, I write every day. I keep a notebook at work and I usually write down important points by hand because it helps me stay productive and remember important details.

The original contains word choice issues and a missing preposition. 'price' is incorrect in context; 'points' or 'prices' depending on meaning is intended. Also 'keep a notebook and work' lacks the preposition 'at' before 'work' to show location. Use 'points' for notes. These are subject-verb agreement and preposition problems; correct by using 'keep a notebook at work' and 'write down important points by hand.'

× I usually note down important details from meetings such as the date delays and the key price because it really helps me stay organized, stay productive, and focus on what do.

✓ I usually note down important details from meetings, such as the dates, deadlines, and key points, because it really helps me stay organized, stay productive, and focus on what I do.

Several errors: 'date delays' is unclear—likely 'dates' and 'deadlines'; 'key price' should be 'key points'; missing subject in 'what do' — should be 'what I do'. Also add commas for clarity. Replace incorrect nouns and add the subject 'I' to fix pronoun/verb structure.

× Yes, they change almost every day, because what's better? Various and I need. Prioritize different tasks important they often need to live.

✓ Yes, they change almost every day, because my priorities vary and I often need to reorder important tasks.

Original is fragmented and unintelligible. 'what's better? Various and I need.' and 'Prioritize different tasks important they often need to live.' are ungrammatical fragments. Combine ideas into a single coherent sentence: 'my priorities vary' and 'I often need to reorder important tasks.' This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× I prefer Halloween because I don't want to spend too much time looking at a screen. It gives me ice cream and makes me feel tired, for example.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I don't want to spend too much time looking at a screen. Typing makes my eyes hurt and makes me feel tired, for example.

The student wrote 'Halloween' and 'It gives me ice cream' which are incorrect word choices and pronoun references. Likely intended 'handwriting' vs 'typing'. 'It gives me ice cream' is nonsensical; replace with 'typing makes my eyes hurt.' This corrects incorrect pronoun/reference and word choice.

× When I take note by hand, I can stay more focused on what I write.

✓ When I take notes by hand, I can stay more focused on what I write.

Use the plural 'notes' when referring to notes in general. 'Take note' is idiomatic for noticing something, while 'take notes' means to write information. This corrects the verb/noun collocation.

× I don't keep a diary because my daily life is quite routine and I don't need to record it.

✓ I don't keep a diary because my daily life is quite routine and I don't need to record it.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; present simple is appropriate to state a habitual situation.

× I prefer to use my phone reminder for important things rather than writing a journal.

✓ I prefer to use my phone's reminder for important things rather than writing a journal.

Add possessive 'phone's' to show the reminder belongs to the phone. Alternatively, 'use phone reminders' would also be correct. This fixes preposition/possessive usage.

× I usually take photos of important events and post them on social media platforms such as WeChat, Movement or Facebook.

✓ I usually take photos of important events and post them on social media platforms such as WeChat, Moments, or Facebook.

'Movement' is incorrect; the correct WeChat feature is 'Moments.' Also add a comma before the final 'or' for clarity. This corrects the proper noun and clarifies the list with correct preposition usage.

× I find it's a community way to document memories and to share them with friends.

✓ I find it's a convenient way to document memories and share them with friends.

'Community way' is awkward and likely incorrect. 'Convenient' or 'comfortable' fits better. Remove the unnecessary 'to' before 'share' to make the infinitive parallel. This fixes word choice and parallel structure.