Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details. Avoid filler phrases (e.g., “like”) and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "taxpayers", "day-to-day").

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot. My job as an auditor requires preparing detailed audit reports for different taxpayers, so I draft and edit reports every day.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence describing what you like to write, then give a concise reason and one specific detail. Remove repetitive phrases and use linking words such as "because" or "therefore" to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing audit reports because my role involves drafting key findings and summarizing them clearly. For example, I often convert audit observations into concise recommendations for clients.

Sugerencia: Make your point clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct answer, then explain specifically how the writing influences clients. Use linking words like "because" and keep sentences shorter to avoid confusion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my writings lead to change because my audit observations highlight problems and recommend improvements. As a result, clients often revise their procedures to address our findings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a brief example. Correct awkward phrasing (e.g., "good at typing", "not comfortable with handwriting") and avoid irrelevant background unless it supports the reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I'm fast and accurate on a computer. For example, I learned to type during college activities and now I can prepare reports much quicker than writing by hand.

Sugerencia: Be more precise about frequency and describe what you record. Use correct grammar (e.g., "diaries" lowercase, "to remember") and link ideas with "so" or "therefore."

Ejemplo: I keep a diary almost every day. I record my daily tasks and important notes so I can review them quickly when I need to remember something.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer, more varied answer: mention other methods (apps, voice notes, photos) and give a short reason or example. Fix grammar (e.g., "write down", "remember"). Avoid hesitation words like "uh."

Ejemplo: Besides my diary, I use my phone's notes app and take photos to record life events. For difficult lessons, I write a short reflection in Notes so I can revisit what I learned later.

× my nature of work is auditing different taxpayer and preparing audit reports.

✓ my nature of work is auditing different taxpayers and preparing audit reports.

The noun 'taxpayer' should be plural 'taxpayers' because it refers to multiple people or entities; use plural to agree with 'different'. Use plural nouns when referring to more than one item. Suggestions: change singular nouns to plural when speaking of multiple entities.

× Therefore I have to write a lot in my like day-to-day work.

✓ Therefore I have to write a lot in my day-to-day work.

The filler 'like' is unnecessary and disrupts register; 'day-to-day' should be hyphenated and used as an adjective. Keep present simple 'have to' for habitual actions. Suggestions: remove filler words and use 'day-to-day' as a hyphenated adjective.

× my nature of work includes writing and drafting different audit points into a report and summarizing them.

✓ my work includes writing and drafting different audit points into a report and summarizing them.

Repeated 'nature of work' is wordy; main issue is style rather than grammar, but the sentence correctly uses gerunds. Simplify to 'my work' to sound natural. Suggestions: prefer concise phrases like 'my work includes...'.

× So it requires a lot of like writing, and I do write a lot.

✓ So it requires a lot of writing, and I do write a lot.

Remove filler 'like'. 'A lot of writing' is correct; 'writing' is an uncountable noun here and does not need pluralization. Suggestions: avoid fillers and use 'a lot of writing' for clarity.

× Yes, I believe so, because in order to put the right some observation of client and the impact of that observation is client have to change certain things to improve them and make them better.

✓ Yes, I believe so, because when we record the correct observations about a client, the client often has to change certain things to improve and make them better.

Original sentence has unclear structure and word order. 'Put the right some observation' is ungrammatical. Use 'record' or 'note' with 'observations about a client'. Subject-verb agreement 'client have' should be 'client has' or better 'the client often has' but here 'client' refers to a single client; if plural, use 'clients often have'. Suggestions: reorganize sentence: state condition ('when we record correct observations') and result ('the client often has to change...'). Ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer word choices.

× the impact of that observation is client have to change certain things to improve them and make them better.

✓ the impact of that observation is that the client has to change certain things to improve them and make them better.

Missing 'that' after 'is' to introduce a clause; 'client have' is incorrect agreement — use 'the client has' for singular. Pronoun reference 'them' is vague but acceptable if referring to 'certain things'; keep consistent number. Suggestions: add 'that' to introduce the clause and correct verb form to 'has'.

× Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

✓ Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you write?

Present simple 'write' is preferable for habits and general preferences rather than progressive 'are writing'. Suggestions: use simple present to talk about general habits: 'when you write'.

× since I was in a CCA I have to like write via computer and typing.

✓ since I was in a CCA I have had to write using a computer and to type.

Tense mismatch: 'since I was' (past) with 'I have to' (present) is inconsistent. Use present perfect 'have had to' to express an ongoing requirement since a past time. 'Write via computer and typing' is awkward; use 'write using a computer and type' or 'type'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent and use 'type' for the action of keyboard input.

× So I'm really good in typing.

✓ So I'm really good at typing.

The correct preposition with 'good' is 'at', not 'in'. Use 'good at' to indicate skill. Suggestions: replace 'good in' with 'good at' when talking about abilities.

× and I'm not really comfortable with writing with the pen like manual writing.

✓ and I'm not really comfortable with writing by hand.

Phrase 'writing with the pen like manual writing' is wordy and unidiomatic. Use 'writing by hand' or 'handwriting' to express manual writing. Preposition 'by' is standard here. Suggestions: simplify to 'writing by hand' or 'handwriting'.

× Well, very often, because I think Diaries are important to maintain.

✓ Well, very often, because I think diaries are important to keep.

No need to capitalize 'Diaries'; 'maintain' is not the natural verb with 'diaries'—'keep a diary' is the idiomatic expression. Use lowercase for common nouns. Suggestions: use 'keep a diary' or 'keep diaries'.

× I write my day-to-day assigned task and write Diaries to keep them remember and quickly go through it whenever I want to.

✓ I write my day-to-day assigned tasks and keep a diary so I can remember them and quickly review them whenever I want to.

Several pronoun and number issues: 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'day-to-day assigned'; 'Diaries' should be 'a diary' or 'diaries' consistently; 'keep them remember' is ungrammatical—use 'so I can remember them'; 'go through it' should agree in number ('review them'). Suggestions: ensure plural nouns match pronouns and use correct verb phrases: 'so I can remember them' and 'review them'.

× Well, I just note down some lessons of my life because I think they are important to wrote down and remember.

✓ Well, I just note down some lessons from my life because I think they are important to write down and remember.

Incorrect verb form 'wrote' (past tense) should be the base infinitive 'write' after 'important to'. Also 'lessons of my life' is better as 'lessons from my life'. Suggestions: use infinitive 'to write down' after 'important to' and prefer 'lessons from my life'.

× Uh, some harsh lessons. I would say I write on my diary and keep them remembered with me.

✓ I would say I write them in my diary and keep them in mind.

'Write on my diary' is unidiomatic; use 'write in my diary'. 'Keep them remembered with me' is ungrammatical—use 'keep them in mind' or 'remember them'. Pronoun 'them' must clearly refer to 'lessons'. Suggestions: use 'write them in my diary' and 'keep them in mind'.