Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (e.g., 'well', 'currently') and repeat information. Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Not really — I don't write much at the moment because I'm not working. However, I enjoy handwriting for personal projects; for example, in school I practiced calligraphy and often made notes by hand to improve my style.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence stating what you like to write, then give one specific reason and a concise example. Reduce repetition and correct small grammar/word-choice issues (e.g., 'in in', 'any poem').

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing short stories and copying poems, mainly because I like experimenting with different handwriting styles. For instance, I would copy a poem into a notebook and try several fonts to make the page look attractive.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, clearer opinion first, then briefly explain your reasoning with a single example. Avoid uncertain phrasing and conditional clutter. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to structure the response.

Ejemplo: I don't believe that simply writing something on paper will make it change by itself. However, I think writing can help with manifestation because putting goals in writing makes you more focused and likely to take action.

Sugerencia: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve by trimming filler words and using smoother linking (e.g., 'if I'm messaging a distant friend' and 'for formal correspondence, I prefer handwriting because it appears more professional'). Keep it to two to three sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I'm messaging a friend who lives far away I prefer typing for speed, but for formal letters or important correspondence I choose handwriting because it feels more professional and personal.

Sugerencia: Answer the frequency more directly (e.g., 'I used to keep a diary regularly in college') and then explain why with a specific example. Fix tense and article use ('the diary', 'clinical duties'). Use one linking phrase to clarify purpose.

Ejemplo: I used to keep a diary regularly in college when I was doing clinical duties. I wrote important notes and observations in the diary so I could recall them later and keep a clear record for future reference.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence naming the methods, then give one specific example of how you use them. Avoid grammatical errors ('Will' at start) and vague phrases ('things and notes'). Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'also'.

Ejemplo: I mainly record my life with photos and videos to preserve memories. For example, I take short videos during family gatherings and save a few written notes about important events for future reference.

× Well, I don't write a lot nowadays because currently I'm not working.

✓ Well, I don't write a lot nowadays because I'm currently not working.

The original sentence places 'currently' after the verb phrase in a way that sounds awkward. This is a present tense/word order issue. Moving 'currently' before 'not working' or keeping it adjacent to 'I'm' yields a more natural present continuous structure: 'I'm currently not working.' Keep adverb placement close to the auxiliary verb for clarity.

× But yes, I love to write on papers and I used to also make notes and learn calligraphy writing when I was in my school.

✓ But yes, I love to write on paper, and I used to make notes and learn calligraphy when I was at school.

The phrase 'on papers' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'paper' for the general activity. 'Used to also make' is awkward; place 'also' before the verb or omit it. 'Calligraphy writing' is redundant — use 'calligraphy.' Use 'at school' instead of 'in my school' for the period of schooling.

× Well, I used to write a lot about different stories or texts that were given in in a notebook or any poem because I love to write things or any topic in different fonts.

✓ Well, I used to write a lot about different stories or texts that were given in a notebook, or I would copy poems because I loved to write things on different topics in different fonts.

The original has repeated 'in in' and incorrect preposition use. 'Given in a notebook' is acceptable but sounded awkward; rephrase to 'given in a notebook' and clarify copying poems. Use 'on different topics' not 'about any topic' for clarity and tense consistency ('used to' with 'loved').

× That was my major interest basically.

✓ That was basically my main interest.

Word order and adjective choice: 'major interest basically' is awkward. Place adverb 'basically' before the adjective phrase: 'basically my main interest.' This preserves past reference 'was.'

× Well, I don't think that if I would write something on a paper would change, but there are many beliefs that if one will write something or they wish on a paper it will get them soon as a manifestation.

✓ Well, I don't think that anything I write on paper will change, but some people believe that if one writes a wish on paper, it will manifest soon.

The original mixes conditional forms incorrectly ('if I would write' is ungrammatical). Use simple present in the if-clause for predictive conditions ('if one writes') and 'will' in the main clause. Simplify 'it will get them soon as a manifestation' to 'it will manifest soon' for clarity and correct verb usage.

× So I think there is something like that.

✓ So I think there is something to it.

'Something like that' is colloquial but vague; 'something to it' is clearer. This corrects pronoun/reference and improves idiomatic expression.

× Like if I'm talking to my friend which is living in a very long distance, so I would prefer typing.

✓ If I'm talking to a friend who lives far away, I would prefer typing.

Use 'who' for people (not 'which'), and 'lives' for third-person singular. 'Living in a very long distance' is ungrammatical; use 'lives far away' or 'who lives at a long distance.' Remove unnecessary 'so' for concise speech.

× But if I have to write any formal correspondence or letter about something very important, I would prefer handwriting because that is more professional.

✓ But if I have to write any formal correspondence or a letter about something important, I prefer handwriting because it is more professional.

Use 'a letter' instead of 'letter' for countability. Use present simple 'I prefer' for habitual preference rather than conditional 'would prefer.' Use 'it' to refer to handwriting rather than 'that.'

× I still remember keeping Diaries back when I was in my college because as I was posted in my clinical duties, I have to write some important information into the Diaries so I could recall them later and it helped me a lot to maintain a record of the things that I want in future.

✓ I still remember keeping diaries back when I was in college because, during my clinical postings, I had to write important information in the diaries so I could recall it later, and it helped me a lot to maintain a record of things I wanted in the future.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless proper noun; use 'in college' not 'in my college.' 'Posted in my clinical duties' is awkward; use 'during my clinical postings.' Tense consistency: use past tense 'had to' and 'wanted.' Use 'in the diaries' or 'in diaries' and refer to 'it' (information) as singular or 'them' if plural; here 'information' is uncountable so use 'it.'

× Will the methods that I use to record my life are mainly videos and some pictures that I clicked basically that are more of a memory so I can recall them later when I'm grown old.

✓ The methods I use to record my life are mainly videos and some pictures I took, which serve as memories so I can recall them when I'm older.

Beginning with 'Will' is incorrect here; it's not a question. Remove 'Will' and use a declarative structure. Use 'took' (past simple) instead of 'clicked' for natural English. 'Grown old' is better as 'older.' Use a relative clause 'which serve as memories' to connect ideas.

× There are few things and notes that I keep safe for my further use.

✓ There are a few things and notes that I keep safe for future use.

Use 'a few' to indicate some (not 'few' which implies almost none). 'For my further use' is awkward; use 'for future use.' This fixes quantifier and article issues.