Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接且相关，但句子略显重复（两个 practice）。可以更自然并提供少量细节来丰富内容，例如写作时长或写作类型。注意句子长度不要超过5句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write about once a week to sharpen my writing and to use new vocabulary. Usually I spend around 30–60 minutes drafting short essays or journal entries so I can practise structure and word choice.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确主题和目的，但“the trend of our society”表述可更具体，增加例子或细化“topics”会更有说服力。可用连接词衔接原因与举例。

Ejemplo: I usually write short essays about social trends, such as technology and education, because those themes often appear in exams. For example, I recently wrote about remote learning to practise arguing for and against a topic.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了一般观点，但语言略夸张且不够具体。可用更自然的词汇（e.g. evolve, shift）并给出具体方面（topics or style）如何改变的例子。避免冗长。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my writing will evolve as society changes. For instance, I might write more about technology and environmental issues in the future, and use new terms and examples relevant to those topics.

Sugerencia: 回答清楚但句子过长且信息重复（habit and not adapted）。可以简化并补充具体情境（e.g. exam study or note-taking）以增强内容。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I've always written by hand and I type quite slowly. For example, when I study for exams I take handwritten notes because it's faster and helps me remember information.

Sugerencia: 回答理由明确但有重复（busy, packed, many assignments）。句子较长且首字母误用大写。建议简化并说明何时会尝试以及如何安排时间。

Ejemplo: I rarely keep a diary because my schedule is usually full with classes and assignments. However, I plan to start writing short entries twice a week, maybe 10–15 minutes at night, to reflect on my day.

Sugerencia: 回答自然且具体，但部分句子口语化重复（need to ... need to). 可用更成熟的表达并补充使用照片的场景或管理方式。

Ejemplo: I usually take photos to record my life because it's very convenient. I store them on my phone and organise albums by events, so I can quickly browse memories when I want to remember something.

× I often write once a week to practice my writing skills and practice the new words I've learned recently.

✓ I often write once a week to practice my writing skills and to practice the new words I've learned recently.

句子结构中并非严格的语法错误，但存在平行结构问题（动词短语保持一致）。在两项并列目的时，用相同形式保持平行（to practice ... and to practice ...），使句子更自然清晰。建议保持并列部分形式一致。

× I often like to write essays about the trend of our society so that I can practice the topics that might appear in my tests.

✓ I often like to write essays about trends in our society so that I can practice the topics that might appear in my tests.

原句中用單數 'the trend' 與 'our society' 搭配顯得不自然，應使用複數 'trends' 或改為 'the trend of our society' 之外的表達。這裡屬於單複數使用問題，使用複數 'trends' 更符合討論多方面社會變化的語境。建議根據語義選擇單數或複數並保持一致。

× Yes, the things I write would change because I see the society is developing really rapidly and there will be a radical transformation during the process.

✓ Yes, the things I write will change because I see society developing really rapidly and there will be a radical transformation during the process.

原句中時態與情態助動詞使用不一致。回答一般陳述未來改變時，用 'will change' 更直接自然；'would' 常用於條件句或間接語氣，這裡不合適。另外 'the society' 中的定冠詞多餘，英語常說 'society'。屬於現在/未來時態及冠詞使用的問題。建議使用 'will' 表述將來事實，並去掉不必要的定冠詞。

× Yes, the things I write would change because I see the society is developing really rapidly and there will be a radical transformation during the process.

✓ Yes, the things I write will change because I see society developing really rapidly and there will be a radical transformation during the process.

原句中 'the society' 使用了不必要的定冠詞。英文中談論 'society' 作為一個概念時通常不用 'the'。此為介詞/冠詞類錯誤（在列表中對應第11 類涉及介係詞但此處也涉及冠詞，根據題目限制同時指出冠詞問題）。建議刪除 'the'。

× I prefer handwriting because this is a habit I've had since I was small and I've not yet adapted to typing, and I often typed really slowly, so it will be more efficient to use handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it's a habit I've had since I was young and I haven't yet adapted to typing, and I often type really slowly, so it is more efficient to use handwriting.

句中時態與情態用法混亂：'I've not yet adapted' 應為現在完成 'I haven't yet adapted'；'I often typed' 使用了過去式，但說明的是習慣性現在情況，應用現在時 'I often type'。另外 'since I was small' 更常見的表達是 'since I was young'。屬於情態/現在完成及過去時誤用，建議根據習慣性行為使用現在時或現在完成時。

× I seldom keep Diaries because I'm really busy in my daily life, my schedule is often packed and I have many assignments and homework every day, so I don't have time to write any Diaries, but I think I will try in my future.

✓ I seldom keep diaries because I'm really busy in my daily life; my schedule is often packed and I have many assignments and homework every day, so I don't have time to write any diaries, but I think I will try in the future.

原句有幾處問題： 1) 'Diaries' 不需要大寫，且在一般表述中用小寫 'diaries'（屬於大小寫/詞形問題，不在清單但需修正）。 2) 'any Diaries' 用法可接受但重複不自然，改為小寫並統一。 3) 'in my future' 不自然，應為 'in the future' 或 'in my future life'。這屬於量詞/短語使用問題（列表中第14類與短語搭配相關）。建議使用 'in the future' 並注意標點將長句拆成更自然的兩部分。

× I often take pictures to record my life because this is really convenient. I just need to save these photos in my cell phones and if I want to review them I just need to tap the app open.

✓ I often take pictures to record my life because it's really convenient. I just need to save these photos on my cell phone, and if I want to review them I just need to tap to open the app.

句中介詞和詞語搭配有誤： 1) 'save ... in my cell phones' 應為 'save ... on my cell phone'，電子文件通常用 'on'。 2) 'tap the app open' 雖然口語可接受，但更自然的寫法是 'tap to open the app' 或 'tap the app to open it'。 以上屬於介詞和短語搭配錯誤（對應第11類）。建議使用 'on my cell phone' 並調整不定式結構使語句更自然。