Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more concise. Also, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason or example.

Ejemplo: I used to write a lot when I was younger, but now I write less because most of my work is done digitally.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing journals every morning because it helps me relax and feel grounded. Additionally, I sometimes write poems to express my creativity.

Sugerencia: Be more confident in your statements and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Avoid filler words and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing topics have changed over time. For example, as a child, I wrote about family and dreams, but now I mostly write about my anxiety.

Sugerencia: Try to eliminate filler words and use linking words like 'however' effectively. Also, make your sentences more concise and clear.

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose. I prefer handwriting poems because it inspires creativity; however, I find typing more efficient for reports and notes.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more precise in your frequency description.

Ejemplo: I write in my journal almost every morning as part of my routine. Although some days I skip it due to time constraints, I generally keep this habit very frequently.

Sugerencia: Remove filler words and use more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and engaging.

Ejemplo: Nowadays, I often use my phone to take pictures because it's convenient. Looking back at photos from five years ago allows me to relive cherished memories.

× I don't really have to, umm, write in papers.

✓ I don't really have to, umm, write on paper.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'papers' here. When referring to the medium of writing, 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'In papers' would imply writing inside multiple paper documents, which is not the intended meaning.

× What do you like to write?

✓ What do you like to write?

No correction needed for this sentence as it is grammatically correct.

× just enjoy the moment in in my mornings.

✓ just enjoy the moment in my mornings.

There is a repeated preposition 'in in' which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'in' corrects the sentence.

× I prefer writing with pen and paper because that's what inspires me more to be creative.

✓ I prefer writing with a pen and paper because that's what inspires me more to be creative.

The phrase 'with pen and paper' is missing the article 'a' before 'pen'. The correct phrase is 'with a pen and paper' to specify the instrument used for writing.

× I find it to be more efficient if I use a computer.

✓ I find it to be more efficient to use a computer.

The phrase 'if I use a computer' is less appropriate here. Using 'to use a computer' better expresses the preference or method for efficiency.

× I'm taking pictures all the time and I think that's the best source of memories for myself.

✓ I'm taking pictures all the time and I think that's the best source of memories for me.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct pronoun is 'me' because the object of the preposition 'for' is the speaker, not a reflexive action.