Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am a law student and often have to write essays on economic law, especially during midterms. I usually use my laptop to complete these assignments.

Sugerencia: 回答不够完整，句子结构不够清晰，且内容表达不完整。建议补充具体原因，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I like writing articles about economic laws, especially antitrust topics, because they help address important social issues and promote fair competition.

Sugerencia: 表达有些模糊，句子不够连贯，建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，明确表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing changes because legal research must keep up with society's developments. Therefore, I focus on current issues to make my essays more relevant and targeted.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇，且表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: I used to write by hand, but now I prefer typing on my laptop because it is more convenient and saves me a lot of time.

Sugerencia: 语法和表达有误，句子结构不够清晰。建议改进语法，表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Honestly, I don't keep a diary because I'm not used to writing about my daily experiences and feelings. I tried when I was young but couldn't continue due to lack of patience.

Sugerencia: 句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误。建议调整句子顺序，使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

Ejemplo: I usually post photos on my WeChat Moments because it's a good way to interact with friends through comments and likes.

× I write a lot because I'm a college student majoring in law so I have a lot of essays or articles about economic law to write

✓ I write a lot because I'm a college student majoring in law, so I have a lot of essays or articles about economic law to write

这里缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。虽然不是严格的单复数错误，但为了表达清楚，应该加逗号。

× I like to write some articles or essays about economic laws such as the topics of antitrust because I think this kind of topics and articles are instrumental in addressing some social.

✓ I like to write some articles or essays about economic laws such as topics on antitrust because I think these kinds of topics and articles are instrumental in addressing some social issues.

“this kind of topics”中“this kind of”应搭配单数名词，改为“these kinds of”更合适；“some social”后缺少名词，应补充“issues”。

× I think they would change because researchers on law have to align with the dynamic development of the whole society.

✓ I think they would change because researchers in law have to align with the dynamic development of the whole society.

“researchers on law”应改为“researchers in law”，介词用法错误。

× So we should write essays about what's happening right now and will be right is very targeted.

✓ So we should write essays about what's happening right now and what will be right; this is very targeted.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和标点，导致表达不清晰。应拆分并补充连接词。

× I used to write by hand, but with the development of the economic devices, I turn to typing on my laptop because it makes writing and browsing the Internet very convenient, convenient and it saves my a lot of time.

✓ I used to write by hand, but with the development of electronic devices, I have turned to typing on my laptop because it makes writing and browsing the Internet very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

“I turn”应使用现在完成时“have turned”表示从过去到现在的变化；“economic devices”应为“electronic devices”；“convenient, convenient”重复，应删去一个；“saves my a lot of time”中“my”应为“me”。

× Honestly, I don't keep Diaries because I'm not accustomed to write down what happens today and what's my feelings on my diary books.

✓ Honestly, I don't keep diaries because I'm not accustomed to writing down what happens each day and my feelings in my diary.

“accustomed to”后应接动名词形式“writing”；“what's my feelings”表达不当，应改为“my feelings”；“on my diary books”应为“in my diary”。

× When I was young I started one in one day but I failed to continue because of less patience.

✓ When I was young, I started one one day but I failed to continue because of lack of patience.

“less patience”用法不当，应为“lack of patience”；“started one in one day”表达不清，应为“started one one day”；句中缺逗号。

× Actually I usually turn to post my photos into friends circle in WeChat because I think it's a good way to interact with others with the help of comments and they always gives me their likes to my photos.

✓ Actually, I usually post my photos to my friends' circle on WeChat because I think it's a good way to interact with others through comments, and they always give likes to my photos.

“turn to post”用法错误，应直接用“post”；“into friends circle”应为“to my friends' circle”；“in WeChat”应为“on WeChat”；“they always gives”主谓不一致，应为“they always give”；“their likes to my photos”表达不自然，改为“give likes to my photos”。