Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly with a simple structure. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail if needed.

Ejemplo: No, I don't write a lot because I am not a writer. However, I do write research projects and homework assignments when required.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too long and somewhat repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase. Be specific but concise.

Ejemplo: I like to write research papers, especially those involving analysis of unknown compounds. I focus on sections like methodology, interactions, and results related to environmental studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use clearer sentences and linking words to express your opinion logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because new ideas and discoveries influence how I express myself. As I learn more, my writing style and content will evolve.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood. Handwriting helps me organize my ideas smoothly, but I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient in different situations.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer about frequency, then add specific details clearly and concisely.

Ejemplo: I keep diaries irregularly. I started writing them when I was about 10 years old, and I have written several diaries about my experiences and memories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct grammar to explain your methods clearly.

Ejemplo: Besides writing diaries, I also take special photos during important occasions to record my life. Looking at these photos helps me remember meaningful moments.

× No, I didn't write a lot even I'm not a writer too, but I like to read.

✓ No, I don't write a lot because I'm not a writer, but I like to read.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'didn't write' with present tense 'I'm'. Since the question is about a habitual action, present tense should be used. Use 'don't write' to indicate habitual action in the present.

× But if you send me when I write, that can be a research project, that can be the sentence, that can be the homework.

✓ But if you give me something to write about, it can be a research project, a sentence, or homework.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'Send me when I write' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Otherwise I don't write out at all.

✓ Otherwise, I don't write at all.

The phrase 'write out' is unnecessary here. The correct expression is 'write at all' to indicate not writing in general.

× I like to write especially the research paper, the research proposal, the research paper which I have researched and analyzed something from an unknown compound, that type of things I write on a research paper and especially the interactions, methods, methodology, the result, which includes all the things at the environment.

✓ I especially like to write research papers and research proposals, where I have researched and analyzed something from an unknown compound. Those are the types of things I write about in research papers, especially the interactions, methods, methodology, and results, which include all aspects of the environment.

The original sentence has singular/plural inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'Research paper' should be plural when referring generally. 'That type of things' is incorrect; it should be 'those types of things'. Also, 'the result' should be plural 'results' to match the list.

× Yes, I think it changed because every person or every writings has its own level and the present time is continuously changing and there is various types of new ideas, new concepts or new discovery can create a big impact on my writing.

✓ Yes, I think it changes because every person or every piece of writing has its own level, and the present time is continuously changing. Various types of new ideas, new concepts, or new discoveries can create a big impact on my writing.

The verb 'changed' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'changes' to indicate ongoing change. 'Every writings' is incorrect; 'every' should be followed by singular noun 'piece of writing'. 'There is various types' should be 'there are various types' or simply 'various types' as subject.

× So definitely if there should any kinds of change, definitely I it would be.

✓ So definitely, if there should be any kind of change, it would be so.

The original sentence has modal verb and auxiliary verb errors. 'Should any kinds' is incorrect; it should be 'should be any kind'. The phrase 'I it would be' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× Actually, it depends about my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

The verb 'depend' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'about'. The correct phrase is 'depends on my mood'.

× Actually, I would say that handwriting is much more smoothing and I can also clear use my variety of ideas.

✓ Actually, I would say that handwriting is much smoother and I can also clearly use my variety of ideas.

'Smoothing' is a verb form; the correct adjective is 'smoother'. 'Clear' is an adjective; the adverb form 'clearly' is needed to modify the verb 'use'.

× But I prefer another typing because the typing is much more confident and it really takes a great note of my writing whenever I want.

✓ But I prefer typing because typing is much more convenient and it really helps me take great notes of my writing whenever I want.

'Another typing' is incorrect; 'typing' is uncountable and does not take 'another'. 'Confident' is an adjective describing people, not typing; likely intended word is 'convenient'. The phrase 'takes a great note' is incorrect; 'helps me take great notes' is correct.

× I'm irregular. I keep regular the Diaries and I started my writing the Diaries when I was about two or three years old, sorry, 10 years old and I started at very early age and I have written about 3:00 and 4:00 Diaries out my experiences where I have I've read and all the things happens in there and it's kind of memories.

✓ I'm irregular. I don't keep diaries regularly, but I started writing diaries when I was about 10 years old. I began at a very early age and have written about 3 or 4 diaries about my experiences, what I have read, and all the things that happened. They are kind of memories.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'keep regular the Diaries' is incorrect; 'keep diaries regularly' is correct. 'Two or three years old, sorry, 10 years old' is confusing; corrected to 'about 10 years old'. '3:00 and 4:00 Diaries' is incorrect; should be '3 or 4 diaries'. 'All the things happens' should be 'all the things that happened'.

× The main methods error code to work out my life definitely I take some special photos when I am in illness of occasions I can be special moments happens in my life.

✓ The main method I use to record my life is definitely taking some special photos. When I am ill or on special occasions, I capture special moments that happen in my life.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Methods error code to work out my life' is incorrect; corrected to 'method I use to record my life'. 'When I am in illness of occasions' is incorrect; corrected to 'when I am ill or on special occasions'. 'I can be special moments happens' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I capture special moments that happen'.

× Otherwise I take the notes of them at my Diaries and I started at a very early age and whenever I see my daddy, I can reminiscing my old moments and that's really impressive.

✓ Otherwise, I take notes of them in my diaries. I started at a very early age, and whenever I see my daddy, I can reminisce about my old moments, and that's really impressive.

'Take the notes of them at my Diaries' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'in my diaries'. 'I can reminiscing' is incorrect; should be 'I can reminisce'. Added 'about' after 'reminisce' for correct usage.