WritingPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

I don't write a lot on paper, I write a lot on mobile.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

I don't like write anything but I write what is important like letters to my friends and to do lists.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

Yes, I believe that because when you're grown up, your mind is changed.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

I prefer timing because it's faster and easier.

Examinador

How often do you keep diaries?

Candidato

I am never write Diaries. Ever.

Examinador

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Candidato

Usually to record my life I use videos.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: Try to use complete sentences and avoid informal expressions like 'write a lot on mobile'. Also, add a reason to make your answer more informative and natural.

Ejemplo: I don't write much on paper, but I often write messages and notes on my mobile phone because it is more convenient.

What do you like to write? Why?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, and provide clearer reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't like writing much, but I do write important things such as letters to my friends and to-do lists because they help me stay organized.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: Use more formal language and explain your idea more clearly with specific reasons. Avoid informal contractions like 'you're'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my thoughts and priorities will develop over time.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: Correct the word 'timing' to 'typing' and expand your answer with reasons using linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit my work on a computer.

How often do you keep diaries?

Puntuación: 50.0

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and avoid short, abrupt answers. Provide a full sentence and explain your habit clearly.

Ejemplo: I never keep diaries because I find it difficult to write regularly and prefer other ways to record my experiences.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: Rearrange the sentence for natural flow and add more details to explain why you use videos.

Ejemplo: I usually record my life by making videos because they capture moments more vividly than writing.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× I don't like write anything but I write what is important like letters to my friends and to do lists.

I don't like writing anything but I write what is important like letters to my friends and to-do lists.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should be followed by the '-ing' form (gerund). So, 'like write' is incorrect; it should be 'like writing'. This is a common rule in English grammar for verbs expressing preferences.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I believe that because when you're grown up, your mind is changed.

Yes, I believe that because when you grow up, your mind changes.

The phrase 'when you're grown up' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'when you grow up' using the simple present tense to indicate a general truth or habitual action. Also, 'your mind is changed' should be 'your mind changes' to use the simple present active form, which is appropriate here.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer timing because it's faster and easier.

I prefer typing because it's faster and easier.

The word 'timing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'typing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects the meaning of the sentence. 'Typing' is the correct verb for inputting text on a keyboard.

Present tense issue

× I am never write Diaries. Ever.

I never write diaries. Ever.

The phrase 'I am never write' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I never write' using the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a title.

Vocabulario

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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