Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often because it is one of my hobbies. At work, my colleagues often ask me to take notes during meetings because they know I enjoy writing. I appreciate their trust in my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid minor grammatical mistakes and be more specific about the types of writing you enjoy.

Ejemplo: I like to write about my daily experiences and important events because I don't want to forget them. For example, every night I make a to-do list for the next day to help me prioritise my tasks and stay organised.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects coherence and content. Try to give a direct response with clear supporting details and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I think about 20% of the things I write might change because plans can be flexible. However, I usually stick to 80% of my priorities. Also, when I write about memorable events, I make sure to record them accurately so I can remember them well.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your preference but lacks clarity and is interrupted by fillers. Try to avoid hesitation sounds, complete your sentences, and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me focus and organise my thoughts better. Although typing is faster, I find that writing by hand allows me to connect more emotionally with what I write, making it easier to remember.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant with good supporting details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence and naturalness.

Ejemplo: I keep diaries regularly, mainly to record significant events in my life. For instance, I note down relationship milestones, my children's birthdays, and our wedding anniversary. Additionally, I write about my daily activities and future plans to stay organised.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I use several apps on my phone to record important events. For example, I use Google Calendar to mark dates of events I want to attend. I also use Zoom Calendar to keep track of milestones achieved by my team at work.

× my colleagues knows me that I love writing

✓ my colleagues know me that I love writing

The subject 'colleagues' is plural, so the verb should be 'know' instead of 'knows' to agree in number.

× they always recommend me whenever we are doing meeting or any gathering for me to write meanings and what I really am

✓ they always recommend me whenever we are having meetings or any gatherings to write meanings and what I really am

The phrase 'doing meeting' is incorrect; the correct preposition and noun form is 'having meetings'. Also, 'any gathering' should be plural 'any gatherings' to match the context.

× I really appreciate about them that they do give me

✓ I really appreciate that they do this for me

The phrase 'appreciate about them' is incorrect; 'appreciate' does not require 'about' and the sentence needs a clearer object. 'They do give me' is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to 'they do this for me'.

× I love to write several things from my day to day's life

✓ I love to write several things from my day-to-day life

The phrase 'day to day's life' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'day-to-day life' as a compound adjective.

× I jot down my activity for the next day

✓ I jot down my activities for the next day

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'several things' and the context of multiple tasks.

× Most of the things that I know Dan, 80% of them I work towards them the way I prioritize it

✓ Most of the things that I know, 80% of them I work towards the way I prioritize them

The phrase 'that I know Dan' seems to have an error; assuming 'Dan' is a mistake or name, it is removed. Also, 'prioritize it' should be 'prioritize them' to agree with plural 'things'.

× And additionally, if I'm writing my memorable events that I want to remember, I ensure that it's

✓ Additionally, if I'm writing about memorable events that I want to remember, I ensure that they are recorded properly

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Ensure that it's' is vague; it should specify what is ensured. Also, 'writing my memorable events' is better as 'writing about memorable events'.

× Sometimes when I do umm, typing, there might be umm, typing errors

✓ Sometimes when I do typing, there might be typing errors

The filler 'umm' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity. The phrase 'do typing' is acceptable but could be improved to 'type' for conciseness.

× but if I'm writing them down, I choose to put more memories and more emotion for me to be able to remember it and when I'm writing it I think

✓ but if I'm writing them down, I choose to put more memories and more emotion into them so I can remember better when I write

The pronouns 'it' and 'them' are inconsistent; 'them' refers to the writings, so 'it' should be 'them'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× I keep Diaries quite often, especially to record important events in my life

✓ I keep diaries quite often, especially to record important events in my life

The word 'Diaries' should not be capitalized and should be in lowercase 'diaries' as it is a common noun.

× For example, I have Diaries of my relationship milestones, my children's birthday, and our wedding anniversary

✓ For example, I have diaries of my relationship milestones, my children's birthdays, and our wedding anniversary

'Diaries' should be lowercase. Also, 'children's birthday' should be plural 'children's birthdays' to refer to multiple children.

× I use several apps on my phone to keep important memories

✓ I use several apps on my phone to keep important memories

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I use Google Calendar to put dates on events I want to attend and also I use like zoom calendar to also record down a milestone staff achieve so that if

✓ I use Google Calendar to put dates on events I want to attend, and I also use Zoom Calendar to record milestones staff achieve

The phrase 'put dates on events' is acceptable but could be clearer as 'schedule events'. 'Use like zoom calendar' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. 'Record down' is redundant; 'record' suffices. The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly.