Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I'm not writing a lot' and improve grammar by saying 'whenever I have free time' instead of 'whenever I got a time like I have a free day'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't write much these days because I work full time and have a busy schedule. However, whenever I have free time, I like to write something to relax.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrasing. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more specific. Use linking words to connect your ideas and clarify your reasons for writing.

Ejemplo: I like to write about my personal experiences and daily life because it helps me reflect. Additionally, I sometimes write paragraphs and research online to improve my writing skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your reasoning logically.

Ejemplo: I believe the things I write will change over time because my goals and perspectives evolve, which influences what I choose to write about.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clarify your points. Avoid filler words like 'Oh' and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my communication and writing skills, including spelling.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and contains filler words. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I rarely keep a diary because of my busy schedule, but when I have time, I like to write in it occasionally.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and filler words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid hesitation sounds. Be more specific about how you use your phone to record your life.

Ejemplo: Nowadays, I use my mobile phone to record my life by taking photos, videos, and notes because it's convenient and always with me.

× But whenever I got a time like I have a free day, I always write something.

✓ But whenever I get time, like when I have a free day, I always write something.

The verb 'got' is the past tense of 'get', but the sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'get' should be used. Also, 'a time' is unnecessary; 'time' is uncountable here.

× I prefer to write the things, uh, things like what, what happen in my life or my experiences, as well as sometime I write uh, some paragraphs or search on Internet to improve my writing skills.

✓ I prefer to write things like what happens in my life or my experiences, and sometimes I write some paragraphs or search on the Internet to improve my writing skills.

'The things' should be 'things' without 'the' because it refers to things in general. 'What happen' should be 'what happens' to agree with singular subject. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb meaning occasionally. 'Search on Internet' should be 'search on the Internet' with the definite article.

× In my opinion, the things which I write it will be changed because the because my goal change, everything will will be changed, though these things also will have a change.

✓ In my opinion, the things which I write will change because my goals change; everything will change, and these things will also change.

'It' is unnecessary after 'which I write'. 'Will be changed' is passive and awkward; active 'will change' is better. 'Because the because' is redundant. 'My goal change' should be 'my goals change' to agree in number and tense. 'Will will be changed' has repeated 'will'. 'Have a change' is incorrect; 'change' is better.

× I like to had writing when I am writing, whenever I write something because this is very beneficial for me.

✓ I like handwriting when I write something because it is very beneficial for me.

'Like to had writing' is incorrect; 'like handwriting' is the correct noun form. 'When I am writing' is redundant after 'whenever I write something'. 'This' should be 'it' referring to handwriting.

× Oh, I can improve my communication skills, her writing skills as well as spelling mistakes.

✓ Oh, I can improve my communication skills, my writing skills, as well as reduce spelling mistakes.

'Her' is incorrect pronoun here; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's skills. Also, 'spelling mistakes' cannot be improved but reduced or corrected.

× To be honest, I rarely keep my Diaries because of uh, I have a busy schedule.

✓ To be honest, I rarely keep my diary because I have a busy schedule.

'Diaries' is plural but 'my' diary is usually singular when referring to a personal diary. Also, 'because of uh' is awkward; 'because' suffices.

× I don't have time to to write Diaries what whenever I have a time, so I prefer to write something on my diary like.

✓ I don't have time to write in my diary, but whenever I have time, I prefer to write something in it.

The sentence has repeated 'to to' and awkward phrasing 'write Diaries what whenever I have a time'. Correct structure is needed. Also, 'write something on my diary like' is incomplete and incorrect; 'write something in it' is better.

× In this contemporary era, umm, everyone have a mobile phones to keep our uh, keep our things in our life.

✓ In this contemporary era, everyone has a mobile phone to keep their things in their life.

'Everyone' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'A mobile phones' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'a mobile phone'. 'Our' is inconsistent with 'everyone'; 'their' is better for singular they.

× So I also prefer to record my life in my mobile phone these days.

✓ So I also prefer to record my life on my mobile phone these days.

'In my mobile phone' is incorrect preposition; 'on my mobile phone' is the correct phrase for recording or storing data.