Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法正确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am a student and have to complete assignments for my courses. Usually, I write two short papers every week to meet my professors' expectations.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够简洁，句子较长且有语法错误，建议使用更简洁的句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ejemplo: If I could choose, I would like to write science fiction because I am a big fan of this genre. For example, I enjoy reading 'The Three-Body Problem,' a famous Chinese novel about an alien invasion.

Sugerencia: 回答未完成且时态使用不当，建议完整表达观点，注意时态一致，并补充具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my writing has changed. When I was a child, I preferred writing stories about school life because it was familiar to me. Now, I like to write more creative and imaginative stories.

Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但有重复和语法错误，建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more efficient. I can easily make changes without affecting the overall structure, which is difficult when writing by hand.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态混乱且表达不够流畅，建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't keep a diary now. However, when I was a child, I wrote in my diary daily to record my school life and activities.

Sugerencia: 回答未完成且有词汇错误（'make a village'应为'vlog'），建议使用正确词汇，完整表达观点，并注意句子完整性。

Ejemplo: Nowadays, I prefer to record my life through pictures and videos on social media. Sometimes, I make vlogs to document my trips and special events like birthday parties or graduation ceremonies because they are more vivid.

× Yes, I currently I'm a student so I write a lot of papers assignments to fulfill the to fulfill the requirements of the courses and expectation of my professors.

✓ Yes, I am currently a student, so I write a lot of papers and assignments to fulfill the requirements of the courses and the expectations of my professors.

句子中“currently I'm”结构不正确，应为“I am currently”。另外，“papers assignments”缺少连接词，应为“papers and assignments”。“expectation”应为复数形式“expectations”，因为指多个教授的期望。

× So I write 2 short page assignments and one a week.

✓ So I write two short-page assignments and one per week.

“2”应写为英文单词“two”，更正式。短语“short page assignments”应为“short-page assignments”，用连字符连接形容词。句尾“and one a week”表达不清，应改为“and one per week”表示频率。

× If I can choose I would like to write fictions and especially the scientific fictions because I'm a big fan of scientific fictions and like I would like to read fictions like 3 Bodies which is a very famous fiction in China and telling about the invasion of the aliens.

✓ If I could choose, I would like to write fiction, especially science fiction, because I'm a big fan of science fiction. I would like to read fiction like "Three-Body Problem," which is a very famous novel in China and tells about the invasion of aliens.

“fictions”应为不可数名词“fiction”。“scientific fictions”应为“science fiction”。“3 Bodies”应为“Three-Body Problem”，是书名。句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整时态。

× When I was a child, I prefer to write stories about school life because that the that's the life I'm most familiar with.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred to write stories about school life because that was the life I was most familiar with.

描述过去时应使用过去时态，“prefer”应改为“preferred”。“that's”应改为“that was”，保持时态一致。

× But as I grow up, I prefer to write something more creative and.

✓ But as I grow up, I prefer to write something more creative.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，需删除。

× Now I prefer typing than handwriting cause typing is very efficient.

✓ Now I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is very efficient.

“prefer”后应接“to”而非“than”，正确表达为“prefer A to B”。“cause”应为正式写法“because”。

× I and I can make a change whenever I want and it won't influence the whole structure.

✓ I can make changes whenever I want, and it won't affect the whole structure.

句子中“I and I”重复，应删去一个“I”。“make a change”改为复数“make changes”更自然。“influence”用在此处不合适，应改为“affect”。

× But it's totally different when doing the handwriting, it's hard to make any correction.

✓ But it's totally different when handwriting; it's hard to make any corrections.

“doing the handwriting”表达不自然，应改为“handwriting”。“correction”应为复数“corrections”，表示多次修改。

× To be honest, I don't keep Diaries now, but when I was a child I keep my Diaries for a daily routine and I write one, one piece of that one day to record my school life like what I performed during the time.

✓ To be honest, I don't keep diaries now, but when I was a child, I kept my diaries as a daily routine and wrote one entry each day to record my school life, like what I did during that time.

“keep”应使用过去时“kept”，与“when I was a child”时态一致。“Diaries”不需大写。句子结构混乱，需调整为过去时态并理顺表达。

× And now with the development of the social media, I prefer to record my life through pictures and videos.

✓ And now, with the development of social media, I prefer to record my life through pictures and videos.

“the social media”中“the”不需要，改为“social media”。

× Sometimes I would make a village to record my trips and my special experience, like the birthday party or this graduation ceremony.

✓ Sometimes I would make a vlog to record my trips and my special experiences, like birthday parties or graduation ceremonies.

“make a village”应为“make a vlog”（视频日志）。“experience”应为复数“experiences”，且“birthday party”与“graduation ceremony”应使用复数形式以匹配泛指。

× I think it's more vivid and.

✓ I think it's more vivid.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，需删除。