Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make it more concise. For example, instead of repeating 'writing these documents', you can combine ideas to make it smoother. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas better.

Ejemplo: I don't write extensively, but I often compose emails and technical documents on my laptop, which helps me stay organized and communicate effectively with my colleagues.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but contains some repetition and minor errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words like 'allow allow', and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I really enjoy writing technical documents, especially about system design, because it allows me to explain how systems interact, which helps my colleagues understand my thought process and makes our work easier.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and lacks supporting details. Try to expand your response by explaining why you think your writing won't change and possibly mention any future interests. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: At the moment, I don't think my writing will change much because I specialize in technical documents, but in the future, I might explore other types of writing if I develop new interests.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar ('more easier' should be 'easier') and by using linking words to connect your points more naturally.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier, faster, and more convenient. Moreover, typing avoids problems with messy handwriting. For instance, I type all my documents, save them on my laptop, and share them easily with colleagues or friends.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: I don't usually keep a diary, but if I find it interesting in the future, I might start writing one to record my daily experiences.

Sugerencia: Your answer is detailed and well-structured. To improve further, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually use online tools and apps to track my daily activities, such as recording my expenses and planning for upcoming weeks or months. These apps allow me to sync data across multiple devices, so I can access my records anytime and stay organized.

× Why I really enjoy writing technical documents.

✓ I really enjoy writing technical documents.

The sentence incorrectly starts with 'Why' which is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct sentence should start directly with the subject 'I'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I do compose mails and write technical documents in my laptop.

✓ I do compose mails and write technical documents on my laptop.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'laptop'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a device like a laptop.

× So allow allow to write about how to design a system, how the system communicates with another system.

✓ So allow me to write about how to design a system, how the system communicates with another system.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'me' after 'allow'. Including 'me' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I'm easily able to convey my thought process to my colleagues, which makes the work a bit easier.

✓ I'm easily able to convey my thought process to my colleagues, which makes the work a bit easier.

No correction needed here; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Right now I don't think it would change because I'm not sure of what else I would write.

✓ Right now I don't think it will change because I'm not sure what else I would write.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here for a present/future prediction. 'Will' is more appropriate. Also, 'of' after 'sure' is unnecessary.

× I'm just good in writing technical documents.

✓ I'm just good at writing technical documents.

The correct preposition after 'good' is 'at', not 'in'. This is a common collocation in English.

× When you are writing, I prefer to type than to write because it is much more easier, faster and convenient.

✓ When I am writing, I prefer to type rather than write because it is much easier, faster and more convenient.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'I' which is inconsistent. Also, 'more easier' is redundant; 'easier' suffices. 'Rather than' is the correct comparative phrase.

× it is much more easier, faster and convenient.

✓ it is much easier, faster and more convenient.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. 'More' should be used with 'convenient' to form 'more convenient'.

× For example, I type all my documents that I need and save it in my laptop and share it with any of my colleagues or friends who need it.

✓ For example, I type all my documents that I need, save them on my laptop, and share them with any of my colleagues or friends who need them.

The pronouns 'it' are incorrectly used for plural 'documents'. They should be 'them'. Also, 'in my laptop' should be 'on my laptop'.

× I don't have the particular habit of keeping Diaries so I'm not sure, but if I do get a chance or in the future if I do find it interesting then I plan to keep a diary.

✓ I don't have the particular habit of keeping diaries, so I'm not sure, but if I get a chance or in the future if I find it interesting, then I plan to keep a diary.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity and smoother flow.

× By maintaining them in apps and online tools, I'm able to easily sync them across multiple devices so I can look at it whenever I want.

✓ By maintaining them in apps and online tools, I'm able to easily sync them across multiple devices so I can look at them whenever I want.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to plural 'them'. It should be 'them' to maintain agreement.