WritingPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

Definitely. As a university students, I have a lot of course work to write in my daily life. Mostly I write the academic reports to get a good grade in the course. Also I write a journal to process my thoughts.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

In the past, I prefer to keep a diary and write novels which is fictional, but now as a university students, I devoted most of my time on academic essays which enhance my ability in research.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

Absolutely, when I was a child I keep the diary to write down what I have done in the days, but now I write for the aim of Academy, which varies from writing styles.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

It depends on the situation. If I don't have a lot of time before the deadline, typing would be a convenient and efficient way. But in the most of time, I think handwriting is more tangible way which help for to post my thoughts.

Examinador

How often do you keep diaries?

Candidato

In the past, I keep Diaries every day to write down what I have done in the day. After I entering university, I don't have so much time, so I just conclude the week and join the aims.

Examinador

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Candidato

Mostly I take a picture of my life such as what I had eat in a week and where I had go in my travel. Also I keep a diary to record what had happened in my life.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Puntuación: 75.0

Sugerencia: 回答时语法错误较多,如“a university students”应为“a university student”,且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意单复数一致,简化句子结构,使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot because as a university student, I have to complete many academic reports to achieve good grades. Besides that, I also keep a journal to organize my thoughts.

What do you like to write? Why?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 时态和语法使用不准确,如“prefer”应为过去式“preferred”,“which is fictional”表达不自然。建议注意时态一致,使用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: I used to prefer keeping a diary and writing fictional novels, but now as a university student, I devote most of my time to academic essays because they help improve my research skills.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 语法错误较多,如“keep”应为过去式“kept”,“aim of Academy”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和时态,表达更具体。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. When I was a child, I kept a diary to record my daily activities, but now I write mainly for academic purposes, which requires different writing styles.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“in the most of time”应为“most of the time”,“help for to post”表达错误。建议使用更地道的表达和正确的语法。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I have a tight deadline, I prefer typing because it's faster. However, most of the time, I find handwriting more tangible and helpful for organizing my thoughts.

How often do you keep diaries?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 语法和表达错误较多,如“keep Diaries”应为“kept a diary”,“After I entering university”应为“After I entered university”,且“join the aims”表达不清楚。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

Ejemplo: I used to keep a diary every day to record my daily activities. But after entering university, I don't have much time, so I usually summarize my week instead.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 时态使用不当,如“had eat”应为“have eaten”,“had go”应为“have gone”。表达不够自然,建议使用正确时态和更流畅的表达。

Ejemplo: I mostly take pictures to record my life, like what I have eaten during the week and places I have visited while traveling. I also keep a diary to note important events.

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