Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus courtes et claires pour exprimer vos idées. Évitez les répétitions et améliorez la fluidité en reliant vos idées avec des mots de liaison simples.

Ejemplo: I don't write much by hand because I prefer typing on my phone. It's faster and more convenient, especially for messages and administrative tasks like filling forms.

Sugerencia: Clarifiez votre réponse en évitant les hésitations et en structurant mieux vos phrases. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent.

Ejemplo: I prefer writing messages on my phone because it's easier and faster. I often use my phone or laptop keyboard for communication.

Sugerencia: Améliorez la clarté en reformulant vos idées et en évitant les répétitions. Utilisez des exemples précis pour soutenir votre réponse.

Ejemplo: I don't think what I write will change much. For example, my signature on official documents is important and cannot be changed.

Sugerencia: Travaillez sur la grammaire et la structure des phrases pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées.

Ejemplo: I often use keyboards on my phone or laptop because typing is faster and more convenient than handwriting. It's useful in many situations beyond just writing on paper.

Sugerencia: Évitez les hésitations et les phrases confuses. Soyez plus précis et utilisez un vocabulaire simple mais correct pour exprimer vos idées.

Ejemplo: I used to keep a diary when I was a teenager, but now I don't. I think diaries are more common for young people. Nowadays, I just use notes.

Sugerencia: Améliorez la fluidité en évitant les phrases courtes et fragmentées. Utilisez des expressions plus naturelles pour expliquer votre point de vue.

Ejemplo: I don't usually record my life. I prefer to live each day as it comes and don't keep diaries or logs of my daily activities.

× I usually don't write a lot by hand because I mostly use my phone to type messages and writing is quite weird for me and I only use it for some administrative tasks like filling out forms or signing documents.

✓ I usually don't write a lot by hand because I mostly use my phone to type messages, and writing is quite weird for me. I only use it for some administrative tasks like filling out forms or signing documents.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It needs to be split into two sentences or connected properly with a conjunction and comma to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually don't type with handwriting, but in the question of uh, writing words, I kindly use my phone to text messages.

✓ I usually don't write by hand, but when it comes to writing words, I usually use my phone to text messages.

The phrase 'type with handwriting' is incorrect; 'write by hand' is the correct expression. Also, 'in the question of' should be 'when it comes to' to express the intended meaning.

× So I spend a lot of my time with my keyboard or phone or my laptop and this is more facilitated in the life of.

✓ So I spend a lot of my time with my keyboard, phone, or laptop, and this makes my life easier.

The phrase 'this is more facilitated in the life of' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with a clearer expression like 'this makes my life easier.' Also, the list of devices should be separated by commas for clarity.

× No, I don't think so, because when I write something I usually short about it and like for instance, they want my signature in administrative papers is an important thing and that is no no way to change it because it is really a serious matter.

✓ No, I don't think so, because when I write something, I usually keep it short. For instance, they want my signature on administrative papers, which is important and cannot be changed because it is a serious matter.

The phrase 'I usually short about it' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually keep it short.' Also, 'they want my signature in administrative papers' should be 'on administrative papers.' The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× When I ride I turned often to use keyboards, so typing with my phone or my laptop is quite convenient for me and facilitates more my daily life.

✓ When I write, I often turn to using keyboards, so typing with my phone or laptop is quite convenient for me and makes my daily life easier.

The word 'ride' is a typo and should be 'write.' 'Turned often to use keyboards' is awkward; 'often turn to using keyboards' is correct. Also, 'facilitates more my daily life' should be 'makes my daily life easier.'

× And it is a faster way than the handwriting and it is used several in several areas, not only handing papers on hand.

✓ It is faster than handwriting and is used in several areas, not only for handling papers by hand.

The phrase 'a faster way than the handwriting' should be 'faster than handwriting.' 'Used several in several areas' is incorrect; it should be 'used in several areas.' 'Handing papers on hand' should be 'handling papers by hand.'

× I had Diaries when I was a teenager, but now I don't have one.

✓ I had a diary when I was a teenager, but now I don't have one.

'Diaries' is plural, but the context suggests a singular diary. Also, 'Diaries' should not be capitalized. The singular form 'a diary' fits better here.

× I think this uh, I think for a small daughter's teenagers in general, but when I grow up, I don't do those type of writing.

✓ I think this is for young teenagers in general, but when I grew up, I didn't do that type of writing.

The phrase 'small daughter's teenagers' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'young teenagers.' Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'grew up' and 'didn't do.' 'Those type' should be 'that type.'

× I usually used notes.

✓ I usually use notes.

The sentence is about current habit, so present tense 'use' is appropriate instead of past tense 'used.'

× I usually don't do that. This type of matters. I don't record my life, but I just live a day like it is and I don't tend to use diary or to registrate my activities that I did during the day, so.

✓ I usually don't do that kind of thing. I don't record my life; I just live each day as it comes, and I don't tend to use a diary or to record my activities during the day.

'This type of matters' is incorrect; it should be 'that kind of thing.' 'Registrate' is not a correct English word; 'record' is appropriate. Also, 'live a day like it is' should be 'live each day as it comes.' The sentence is also run-on and needs punctuation for clarity.