Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific examples. Avoid filler phrases like "right?" and redundant expressions.

Ejemplo: I don't write a lot these days, but I often make To Do Lists to organize my work and daily routines. I also write lesson plans for my kids occasionally.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and contains some unclear phrases. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: Currently, I mostly write about my work and daily routines, like To Do Lists. However, in the past, I used to keep a personal diary where I recorded my feelings and daily experiences.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organize your thoughts logically. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I don't think the things I write will change much because I mainly write about my work commitments, shopping lists, and my kids' lesson plans, which remain consistent.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid filler phrases like "In my opinion I would say yes" and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I value neat penmanship. In fact, I plan to learn calligraphy soon, as good handwriting can positively influence the reader's impression.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: I don't keep a diary nowadays, but during my school and college days, I wrote in one regularly. Writing helped me express my feelings and made me feel better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid incomplete thoughts. Be specific about your methods and explain their purpose.

Ejemplo: I used to record my life in a personal diary, but now I prefer taking photos of special moments. I have created an album to preserve these memories and cherish them later.

× Actually, nowadays I won't say that I write a lot, but I write most often, right?

✓ Actually, nowadays I wouldn't say that I write a lot, but I write quite often, right?

The modal verb 'won't' is incorrect here because it expresses refusal or future tense. The correct modal verb is 'wouldn't' to express a polite or hypothetical negation. Also, 'most often' is better replaced with 'quite often' to express frequency more naturally.

× But there was a day when I used to write how was my write, my personal diary where I I used to mention how my day has been.

✓ But there was a time when I used to write about my day, my personal diary where I used to mention how my day had been.

The phrase 'how was my write' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'about my day'. Also, 'has been' should be in past perfect 'had been' to maintain past narrative consistency. The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and corrected.

× So yes, I used to write my feelings on that diary.

✓ So yes, I used to write my feelings in that diary.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'diary'; the correct preposition is 'in' because feelings are written inside the diary.

× Actually I believe the things that I write won't change because as as of now I write only my work.

✓ Actually, I believe the things that I write won't change because, as of now, I write only about my work.

The phrase 'as as of now' contains a repetition error; it should be 'as of now'. Also, 'write only my work' is incomplete; it should be 'write only about my work' to be grammatically correct.

× My work commitments and what I have to buy are also my and also my kids lesson plans to manage their studies.

✓ My work commitments and what I have to buy are also mine, and also my kids' lesson plans to manage their studies.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used; it should be 'mine' to indicate possession. Also, 'kids lesson plans' needs an apostrophe to show possession: 'kids' lesson plans'.

× In my opinion I would say yes, I prefer to write in a very good handwriting.

✓ In my opinion, I would say yes, I prefer to write with very good handwriting.

The phrase 'in a very good handwriting' is incorrect; 'handwriting' is uncountable and should be used with 'with' instead of 'in' and without the article 'a'.

× Also I have a plan to learn calligraphy in in few days because I prefer good handwriting a lot.

✓ Also, I have a plan to learn calligraphy in a few days because I prefer good handwriting a lot.

The phrase 'in in few days' contains a repetition error and is missing the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'in a few days'.

× Basically, I nowadays I don't keep diary with myself, but there was a day, especially in my college days and my school days, I used to keep a diary with me all the time.

✓ Basically, nowadays I don't keep a diary with me, but there was a time, especially in my college and school days, when I used to keep a diary with me all the time.

The phrase 'keep diary with myself' is incorrect; it should be 'keep a diary with me'. Also, 'there was a day' is better expressed as 'there was a time' for general past periods. Added 'when' to introduce the relative clause.

× I used to write all the feelings, it makes me feel better and I also used to express myself better.

✓ I used to write all my feelings; it made me feel better and I also used to express myself better.

'All the feelings' is vague; 'all my feelings' is more precise. The tense in 'it makes me feel better' should be past tense 'it made me feel better' to maintain consistency with past narrative.

× I used to record my life mostly in my personal diary but nowadays I don't get the time.

✓ I used to record my life mostly in my personal diary, but nowadays I don't have the time.

The phrase 'I don't get the time' is informal and less clear; 'I don't have the time' is more appropriate and grammatically correct. Added a comma before 'but' to separate independent clauses.

× I also made me I. I have also made an album so that I keep a check on I so that I can cherish my.

✓ I have also made an album so that I can keep track and cherish my memories.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to a coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning: making an album to keep track and cherish memories.