Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and hesitations to make your answer more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot. During my school and college days, I took many notes, and now at work, I continue to write because I need to keep records of my tasks.

Sugerencia: Avoid asking questions in your answer and reduce filler phrases like 'you know'. Instead, give a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I like to keep a diary because journaling helps me write more fluently and also calms my mind after a busy day.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and long, repetitive sentences. Use linking words to structure your answer clearly and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, the way I write probably won't change in the future because I have been writing consistently for a long time.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases like 'I have somebody who loves'. Use clear and direct sentences with appropriate linking words to express your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting over typing because I enjoy the traditional way of writing on paper rather than using a computer or phone.

× For example, in in my school days and college days I had to write a lot of notes.

✓ For example, in my school days and college days I had to write a lot of notes.

The repetition of 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the extra 'in' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× However, I do it now as well at my work because I need to I have to take notes of the of the work.

✓ However, I do it now as well at my work because I have to take notes of the work.

The phrase 'I need to I have to' is redundant and incorrect. Using 'I have to' alone is sufficient to express obligation. Also, removing the repeated 'of the' improves sentence correctness.

× Can I also have a habit of keeping a diary?

✓ I also have a habit of keeping a diary.

The original sentence is structured as a question but the intended meaning is a statement. Changing it to a statement corrects the sentence structure.

× So I do journaling.

✓ So I keep a journal.

The phrase 'do journaling' is awkward and uncommon. Using 'keep a journal' is a more natural and grammatically correct expression.

× It helps me to write it.

✓ It helps me to write.

The pronoun 'it' at the end is unnecessary and unclear. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× I hope it won't change in the future as well.

✓ I hope it won't change in the future.

The phrase 'in the future as well' is redundant. 'In the future' alone suffices to express the intended meaning.

× Well, I'm not the the type of person who prefers to type on a computer or the OR a phone.

✓ Well, I'm not the type of person who prefers to type on a computer or a phone.

The repetition of 'the' and the inclusion of 'OR' in uppercase are incorrect. Removing the extra 'the' and 'OR' corrects the sentence.

× I have somebody who loves traditional way of writing.

✓ I am somebody who loves the traditional way of writing.

Using 'I have somebody' is incorrect here; 'I am somebody' is correct. Also, 'traditional way' needs the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× So I definitely love writing in a paper.

✓ So I definitely love writing on paper.

The phrase 'in a paper' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' and 'paper' is uncountable here, so no article is needed.