WritingPart 1 Informe

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Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

Actually, I don't write that much nowadays. I mostly use the computer for reading or doing some research, so I hardly have time to write.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

Let me think. I enjoy writing stories, especially cartoons, because I find them exciting and full of imagination.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

Yes, I do. I think the things I write will change as I grow older and as my life and other things change.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

Actually, I prefer the handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time. But nowadays I use a computer most of the time, so I prefer typing.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.5Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Puntuación: 75.0

Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁,但缺少直接回应问题的主题句,且内容稍显重复。建议开头直接回答问题,然后用具体细节支持,避免冗余。

Ejemplo: No, I don't write a lot these days because I spend most of my time reading or researching on the computer, which leaves me little time for writing.

What do you like to write? Why?

Puntuación: 85.0

Sugerencia: 回答较好,表达了喜好和原因,但开头的“Let me think”显得不够自然。建议直接回答问题,并用连接词丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing stories, especially cartoons, because they are exciting and full of imagination, which allows me to express my creativity.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Puntuación: 80.0

Sugerencia: 回答直接,但内容较为简单,缺少具体细节。建议增加具体原因或例子,使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I grow older because my experiences and interests will evolve, influencing the topics and style I choose.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Puntuación: 90.0

Sugerencia: 回答清晰且有逻辑,表达了时间变化带来的偏好变化。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I used to prefer handwriting during my high school years since I didn't have a computer then; however, now I mostly use a computer, so I prefer typing for convenience and speed.

Gramática

Third person singular issue

× What do you like to write? Why?

What do you like to write? Why?

该句无语法错误,符合第三人称单数的使用规则。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Actually, I prefer the handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time.

Actually, I preferred handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time.

这里使用了不正确的定冠词“the handwriting”,应去掉“the”变为“handwriting”,因为handwriting作为不可数名词不需要冠词。同时,时态应与过去时间状语“during my high school years”一致,使用过去时“preferred”。

Vocabulario

ExcitingThrilling; Arousing
FullFilled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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