Writing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you write a lot?
Candidato
As a traditional liberal arts student, to be honest, I have to write a lot of words when I have examinations or when I have homework because that is my duty.
Examinador
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidato
Maybe I would like to write some Diaries, especially when I was a senior in high school, because I think marketing a diary is a very good way for me to relax myself. And also, you know, in Senior High School we have a lot of academic stress, so it can sincerely relieve my stress.
Examinador
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidato
Maybe I think the things I write will change because I think writing is a good way for me to relax myself and express my emotion. But when I was a senior in high school, I didn't have enough time to write or to write what I like. So maybe I would like to choose some.
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidato
Maybe I would prefer handwriting than typing because I like the size of pen touching the paper. So maybe I think handwriting can give us a detailed sense of writing that can't be brought by typing.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和冗长。可以直接回答是否经常写作，并简要说明原因，避免使用“to be honest”等口语化且多余的表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often because my studies require me to complete many essays and assignments.
What do you like to write? Why?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中应避免语法错误和不恰当的词汇使用，如“marketing a diary”应为“keeping a diary”。同时，回答应更简洁，使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: I like to keep a diary, especially during my senior year of high school, because it helped me relax and manage the academic stress.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答应更明确，避免模糊和重复。应直接回答问题，说明写作内容如何变化，并用具体细节支持观点。
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing topics will change over time. In high school, I wrote mainly about my daily life, but now I prefer writing about my thoughts and experiences.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答应更自然，避免重复使用“maybe”，并用更准确的表达描述偏好和原因。可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I enjoy the tactile feeling of the pen on paper, which makes the writing process more personal and detailed.
Gramática
× Maybe I would like to write some Diaries, especially when I was a senior in high school, because I think marketing a diary is a very good way for me to relax myself.
✓ Maybe I would like to write some diaries, especially when I was a senior in high school, because I think keeping a diary is a very good way for me to relax myself.
这里的'marketing a diary'用词错误，应该用动名词短语'keeping a diary'表示'写日记'的动作。动名词用法错误属于动词+ing形式错误。
× Maybe I would like to write some Diaries, especially when I was a senior in high school, because I think marketing a diary is a very good way for me to relax myself.
✓ Maybe I would like to write some diaries, especially when I was a senior in high school, because I think keeping a diary is a very good way for me to relax myself.
'Diaries'首字母不应大写，且应为复数形式'diaries'，表示多篇日记。大小写错误和复数形式错误属于单复数问题。
× Maybe I would prefer handwriting than typing because I like the size of pen touching the paper.
✓ Maybe I would prefer handwriting to typing because I like the feeling of the pen touching the paper.
'prefer'后面应接介词'to'而非'than'，表示偏好比较。'the size of pen'表达不准确，应为'the feeling of the pen'更符合语境。
× Maybe I would prefer handwriting than typing because I like the size of pen touching the paper.
✓ Maybe I would prefer handwriting to typing because I like the feeling of the pen touching the paper.
介词使用错误，'prefer'后应接'to'表示比较，'than'用于比较级。
× So maybe I think handwriting can give us a detailed sense of writing that can't be brought by typing.
✓ So maybe I think handwriting can give me a detailed sense of writing that can't be brought by typing.
这里主语是第一人称单数，代词应为'me'而非'us'，保持人称一致。
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