Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure correct plural forms (e.g., 'short stories', 'journals'). Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy to sound more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a bit, especially for my studies and work. Writing helps me organise my thoughts clearly. I often write emails, reports, and sometimes short stories for relaxation. I also enjoy writing in my journal when I have free time.

Sugerencia: Make sure to use correct plural forms and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide clearer reasons.

Ejemplo: I love writing personal journals and short stories because they allow me to reflect on my daily experiences and emotions, which helps me understand myself better. Additionally, crafting short stories lets me explore my creativity and express my ideas.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating similar ideas and ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'mindsets and experiences will evolve and shift'). Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons more clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because as I grow older, my perspectives, mindsets, and experiences will evolve and shift, which will impact my writing style.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'UH'. Also, try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words like 'however' properly to contrast ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing when I write because it's much faster and more convenient, especially for long texts. For example, when I write essays or emails, typing allows me to edit and organise my work clearly. However, I sometimes enjoy handwriting as well.

× Writing helps me to organize my thoughts clearly and I often write emails, reports and sometimes even short story for relaxations.

✓ Writing helps me to organize my thoughts clearly and I often write emails, reports and sometimes even short stories for relaxation.

The noun 'short story' should be plural 'short stories' to match the plural context with 'emails' and 'reports'. Also, 'relaxations' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'relaxation' in singular form as an uncountable noun here.

× Uh, I also enjoy writing journal when I am free.

✓ Uh, I also enjoy writing in my journal when I am free.

The noun 'journal' needs the preposition 'in' to indicate the activity of writing inside the journal. Also, 'journal' should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'my' to specify ownership.

× Writing journals allows me to reflect on my thoughts on my daily experience and emotions, which helps me understand myself better.

✓ Writing journals allows me to reflect on my thoughts on my daily experiences and emotions, which helps me understand myself better.

The noun 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to correctly refer to multiple daily events or occurrences.

× Additionally, crafting short story let me explore my creativity and express.

✓ Additionally, crafting short stories lets me explore my creativity and express myself.

'Short story' should be plural 'short stories' to match the context. The verb 'let' should be 'lets' to agree with the singular subject 'crafting'. Also, 'express' needs an object, so 'express myself' is appropriate.

× As I grow older, my perspective, mindsets and experiences will evolve and somehow shifts over time impacting my writing.

✓ As I grow older, my perspectives, mindsets and experiences will evolve and somehow shift over time impacting my writing.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match the plural 'mindsets' and 'experiences'. The verb 'shifts' should be 'shift' to agree with the plural subject.

× Uh, for example, when I write essays or emails, typing allows me to edit and organize my task clearly.

✓ Uh, for example, when I write essays or emails, typing allows me to edit and organize my tasks clearly.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to correctly refer to multiple items such as essays and emails.

× UH, however, sometimes enjoy handwriting as well.

✓ However, sometimes I enjoy handwriting as well.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I'. Also, 'UH' should be lowercase 'uh' or omitted for clarity.