Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I write a lot' and clarify unclear terms such as 'some probability'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I work as a reporter. Every day, I write articles mainly about health, news, and occasionally about probabilities in statistics.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your motivation but is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I really want to' and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing health-related articles because my mother often shares incorrect health information. Therefore, I want to provide accurate information to help her and others stay well informed.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Use precise vocabulary and avoid vague expressions like 'the world is strange'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because medical knowledge and technology are constantly evolving. Therefore, I need to update my articles regularly and improve my writing skills accordingly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, explain your preference clearly with supporting reasons and linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because if I forget how to spell a word, digital devices can help me correct it. This makes my writing more accurate and efficient.

× I do a lot of writing job because I'm now a reporter.

✓ I do a lot of writing jobs because I'm now a reporter.

The noun 'job' should be plural 'jobs' because 'a lot of' indicates more than one job. Using the singular form here is incorrect.

× I write a lot of articles daily and I write a lot of article related health and news and some probability.

✓ I write a lot of articles daily and I write a lot of articles related to health, news, and some probability.

The noun 'article' should be plural 'articles' to agree with 'a lot of'. Also, 'related health' should be 'related to health' to use the correct preposition.

× I do really want to write the article related healthy because my mother always sends me the wrong healthy article and I really want to change her mind and I really want to change.

✓ I really want to write articles related to health because my mother always sends me the wrong health articles and I really want to change her mind.

The phrase 'related healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'related to health' using the correct preposition. Also, 'the article' should be plural 'articles' to match the context. The sentence was also simplified for clarity.

× I really want to share or write some correct information to people and.

✓ I really want to share or write some correct information with people.

The verb 'share' is correctly followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating the person receiving the information. Using 'to' is incorrect here.

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

Although this sentence is a question, the modal verb 'would' is less appropriate here than 'will' to express future possibility. This is addressed in the next correction.

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

The modal verb 'would' is used for hypothetical or conditional situations. Since the question asks about future changes, 'will' is the correct modal verb to express future certainty or likelihood.

× Yes, I do think the things I want would always change because the world is strange and everything is changed and the medical exchange, the technology exchange and everything is changed.

✓ Yes, I do think the things I want will always change because the world is strange and everything changes, including medical and technological advances.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used; 'will' is appropriate for future certainty. Also, 'everything is changed' is incorrect; the present simple 'everything changes' is correct to describe ongoing change.

× So I need to keep make my article change and upgrade and I will upgrade my writing skills.

✓ So I need to keep making my articles change and upgrade, and I will upgrade my writing skills.

The phrase 'keep make' is incorrect; it should be 'keep making' using the verb + -ing form after 'keep'. Also, 'article' should be plural 'articles' to match the context.

× I prefer typing more than handwriting because when every time I forget the words or the words how to write or how to spell it and digital devices can help me to correct the words to the right words and.

✓ I prefer typing more than handwriting because whenever I forget words or how to write or spell them, digital devices can help me correct the words.

The phrase 'when every time' is redundant; 'whenever' is correct. 'The words how to write or how to spell it' is awkward; it should be 'how to write or spell them' with correct pronoun agreement. Also, 'help me to correct' is better as 'help me correct' for natural usage.