Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和语法。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write every day because writing is an essential part of my schoolwork. For example, I often have to submit essays and project outlines for my classes.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和人称，简化句子结构，并明确表达原因。

Ejemplo: I like writing novels because it allows me to create characters and stories. For instance, I can write about a girl who studies at Cambridge University and achieves her dreams, which inspires me.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，存在语法和用词错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意时态一致。

Ejemplo: Yes, my writing has changed over time. When I was in kindergarten, I wrote simple diaries about my daily activities. Now, I focus more on social issues, such as the development of the Chinese economy.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议简化表达，明确说明原因，并使用恰当的词汇。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it gives me a sense of accomplishment when I see my work on paper. It also helps me remember the words I have used.

× Yes of course every day I I am writing because I see writing is everywhere.

✓ Yes, of course, every day I write because I see writing is everywhere.

这里应该使用一般现在时的动词形式write，而不是现在进行时am writing，因为表达的是习惯性动作。

× Like our school need us to submit the essay and business class need us to submit the project outline.

✓ Like our school needs us to submit essays and business class needs us to submit project outlines.

主语是单数（school, business class），谓语动词需要加-s变为needs。essay和project outline应使用复数形式，因为通常是多篇文章和多个项目大纲。

× I like to write a novel because I can set up the character I like.

✓ I like to write a novel because I can create the characters I like.

这里用set up不合适，应该用create表示“创造角色”，且character应为复数characters。

× For example, I can set up a girl who is going to have a class on a famous school like the Cambridge University, and she can also realize the dream that I can now chased and I can also control his life.

✓ For example, I can create a girl who is going to attend a famous school like Cambridge University, and she can also realize the dream that I have now chased and can also control her life.

a class on a famous school应改为attend a famous school；the Cambridge University前不加定冠词；动词时态和人称需调整；his life应为her life，与前文的girl保持一致。

× Yes, of course, in the past, when I was in the kindergarten, I always write the scene, what I've done today and what I eat, like a diary.

✓ Yes, of course, in the past, when I was in kindergarten, I always wrote about the scenes, what I had done that day and what I ate, like a diary.

描述过去习惯动作时，write应改为过去式wrote；what I've done应改为过去完成时had done；what I eat应改为过去式ate。

× And now I'm more focused on the society.

✓ And now I'm more focused on society.

society前不需要加定冠词the，因为这里指的是社会的整体概念。

× And I mean like the topic of the development of Chinese economic, I mean a more profound topic.

✓ And I mean topics like the development of the Chinese economy, I mean more profound topics.

economic应改为economy；the development of Chinese economy前应加定冠词the；topic应为复数topics以匹配上下文。

× Well, I prefer handwriting because when I see a paper of job on my writing, I feel a sense of achievement and I can also see the rewards in the paper.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting because when I see a paper on my writing, I feel a sense of achievement and I can also see the rewards in the paper.

短语a paper of job不正确，应改为a paper on my writing，表示“关于我的写作的论文”。

× It is clear that what the word I used before.

✓ It is clear what words I used before.

句子结构不完整，且word应为复数words；去掉that使句子更通顺。