WritingPart 1 Informe

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Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

Yes, I do write quite a lot, especially when I need to jot down notes during my classes. Writing helps me to organize and summarize all the important points discussed during the class and that makes it easier for me to review them later.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

Do you like to write? I usually enjoy writing fiction because it stimulates my imagination and allows me to create unique stories. Writing fiction also makes me more creative and productive and encouraged me to think outside the box and develop new ideas. Like for example, when I write, I often come up with interesting characters and plots.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

I think yes, because The thing is, we're right. I write with change whenever I need to change it and there's an idea that just comes out of my mind, it will I suddenly gonna jot it down and that would change everything that I wrote down.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

So I prefer handwriting than typing because when I write notes, essays, or even fiction by hand, I feel more engaged and connected to the process. Like this approach helps me focus better and stimulates my creativity, allowing ideas to flow more naturally from my brain.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.5Fluidez y coherencia: 6.5Pronunciación: 6.5Gramática: 6.0Recurso léxico: 6.5

Gramática

Verb in the past participle form

× Writing fiction also makes me more creative and productive and encouraged me to think outside the box and develop new ideas.

Writing fiction also makes me more creative and productive and encourages me to think outside the box and develop new ideas.

The verb 'encouraged' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. Since the subject is 'Writing fiction' which is singular, the verb should be in the third person singular present tense 'encourages' to agree with the subject and maintain tense consistency.

Sentence structure errors

× I think yes, because The thing is, we're right.

I think yes, because the thing is, we're right.

The sentence has a capitalization error with 'The' in the middle of the sentence and the phrase 'we're right' is unclear and likely incorrect in context. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. Correcting the capitalization and clarifying the sentence would improve clarity.

Present tense issue

× I write with change whenever I need to change it and there's an idea that just comes out of my mind, it will I suddenly gonna jot it down and that would change everything that I wrote down.

I write with changes whenever I need to change it, and if an idea just comes to my mind, I suddenly jot it down and that changes everything I wrote down.

The sentence has multiple tense and grammatical errors. 'Write with change' should be 'write with changes' (plural). 'It will I suddenly gonna jot it down' is incorrect; it should be 'I suddenly jot it down'. Also, 'would change' should be 'changes' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence is corrected for proper tense and clarity.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So I prefer handwriting than typing because when I write notes, essays, or even fiction by hand, I feel more engaged and connected to the process.

So I prefer handwriting to typing because when I write notes, essays, or even fiction by hand, I feel more engaged and connected to the process.

The preposition 'than' is incorrectly used after 'prefer'. The correct preposition to use after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to'. Therefore, 'prefer handwriting than typing' should be 'prefer handwriting to typing'.

Vocabulario

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestingAbsorbing
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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