Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了写作的频率和原因，但语法和用词有些错误，如“write the diary”应为“write a diary”，“experiences happened”应为“experiences that happened”，“a lot of essay”应为“a lot of essays”。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，同时简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often because I keep a diary to record my daily experiences. Also, I frequently write essays for my studies.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“funding experiences”应为“fun experiences”，“that I happened”应为“that happened to me”，“plan”应为复数“plans”。建议加强词汇准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: In my diary, I like to write about fun experiences that happened during the day. Besides that, I also write schedules and plans for the future.

Sugerencia: 句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误，如“instead of change”应为“instead of changing”，“so it hardly to change”应为“so they hardly change”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意动词形式。

Ejemplo: No, I usually follow my plans strictly and don't change them often. Also, writing things down inspires me to achieve my goals, so they rarely change.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“this essential events”应为“these essential events”。句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达并使用连接词提高连贯性。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because writing things down helps me remember important events better. Also, it's convenient since I don't need to rely on technology or batteries.

× I like to write the diary to record the experiences happened every day.

✓ I like to write a diary to record the experiences that happen every day.

这里'diary'是可数名词，应该用不定冠词'a'。'experiences'前面需要加定语从句'that happen'来修饰，且用一般现在时，因为是习惯性动作。

× I often have to write a lot of essay in my study.

✓ I often have to write a lot of essays in my study.

'essay'是可数名词，表示多篇文章时应使用复数形式'essays'。

× For diary, I like to write some funding experiences that I happened in the daytime.

✓ For my diary, I like to write some fun experiences that I have during the daytime.

'funding'应为'fun'，且'experiences'是复数，'happened'应改为现在完成时'have'或一般现在时'during'表示习惯动作。

× More importantly, I also write some schedules or plan for the future.

✓ More importantly, I also write some schedules or plans for the future.

'plan'应使用复数形式'plans'，因为前面有'some'表示复数。

× No, since I will follow my plan strictly instead of change it very frequently.

✓ No, since I will follow my plan strictly instead of changing it very frequently.

'instead of'后面应接动名词形式，故'change'应改为'changing'。

× More importantly, the things we write will also inspire me to achieve and realise them, so it hardly to change.

✓ More importantly, the things I write will also inspire me to achieve and realize them, so they hardly change.

'things'是复数，代词应为'they'，'hardly to change'结构错误，应为'hardly change'。

× I like handwriting better since during the process when I write everything down, it can also strengthen the memory for this essential events.

✓ I like handwriting better since during the process when I write everything down, it can also strengthen the memory for these essential events.

'events'是复数，指示代词应为'these'而非'this'。