Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、話の流れをより自然にするために接続詞を使い、冗長な表現を避けると良いでしょう。また、語彙の幅を広げ、より具体的な表現を加えることが望ましいです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am preparing for the IELTS exam. Therefore, I practice daily by writing at least three essays of 250 words each to improve both my writing and speaking skills.

Sugerencia: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法的な誤りや繰り返しが見られます。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。また、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いです。

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing about environmental issues because I have gained extensive knowledge on this topic since I was young by reading newspapers, articles, and watching YouTube videos.

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや冗長な表現が多いです。より簡潔に、論理的に話を展開し、接続詞を効果的に使うことを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: I don't think my writing topics will change because I am focused on IELTS preparation. Unless the exam format changes drastically, I will continue practicing the same types of essays.

Sugerencia: 回答は明確ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。比較を示す際は接続詞を使い、語彙を工夫してより自然な表現にしましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because it is more efficient and faster. Moreover, I make fewer mistakes when typing since I am skilled at it, whereas my handwriting is quite poor.

× So every day I at least write 3 topics with 250 words.

✓ So every day I at least write 3 topics with 250 words each.

The original sentence lacks clarity about the quantity related to 'words'. Adding 'each' clarifies that each topic contains 250 words, improving the plural usage and meaning.

× My favorite topic is environmental issue.

✓ My favorite topic is environmental issues.

The phrase 'environmental issue' should be plural 'environmental issues' because it refers to a general category of multiple problems, not a single issue.

× It is because I have various knowledge for the topic because when I was young I used to study a lot by reading newspapers, articles and YouTube.

✓ It is because I have various knowledge about the topic since when I was young I used to study a lot by reading newspapers, articles, and watching YouTube.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'knowledge about' is the correct collocation. Also, 'reading YouTube' is incorrect; it should be 'watching YouTube'. The conjunction 'because' is repeated unnecessarily; replacing the second 'because' with 'since' improves sentence flow.

× If IELTS changed completely, yes it would, but that is not likely to happen.

✓ If IELTS changed completely, yes it would, but that is unlikely to happen.

The phrase 'not likely to happen' is better expressed as 'unlikely to happen' for grammatical correctness and naturalness in modal verb usage.

× Additionally, there would be less mistakes because I am really good at typing.

✓ Additionally, there would be fewer mistakes because I am really good at typing.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns; 'mistakes' is countable, so 'fewer' is the correct quantifier here.