Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni uttor e boro boro kotha bar bar bolchen, ar kichu kotha clear na. Apnar uttor ke sohoje bujhte parbo emon vabe korte hobe. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor proyojon moto details dite hobe, ar sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathito korte hobe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot because I am a businessman. I usually write notes about my sales and other business activities to keep everything organized.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e onek bar 'I' use korchen ar kichu kotha clear na. Apnar kotha gulo sohoje ar shothik bhabe bolte hobe. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor karon shoho details dite hobe, ar sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathito korte hobe.

Ejemplo: I like writing because it helps me stay disciplined. I regularly write about my daily routine, which helps me focus better.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor onek confused ar incomplete. Proshner uttor sohoje ar spostho bhabe dite hobe. Proshner uttor dite prothome ekta topic sentence dite hobe, tarpor karon shoho details dite hobe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because my business and daily activities change, so I update my notes accordingly.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu kotha bar bar use hoyeche ar sentence gulo shothik bhabe gathito hoyni. Apnar kotha gulo sohoje ar spostho bhabe bolte hobe. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor karon shoho details dite hobe.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it is easy and I can write anytime and anywhere on paper. I find it more convenient than typing.

× Yes, I am like that a lot because I am a businessman and I write everything my business purpose and when I go to my business place and there I my business related everything is noted and there are sales and.

✓ Yes, I do that a lot because I am a businessman and I write everything for my business purposes. When I go to my business place, everything related to my business is noted there, including sales.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors, including missing verbs and unclear phrasing. 'I am like that a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'I do that a lot' to express frequency of action. Also, 'I write everything my business purpose' lacks prepositions and clarity; it should be 'I write everything for my business purposes.' The sentence is long and confusing, so breaking it into smaller sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like right because it is very important part of my life and more discipline in the writing and I I I regularly my write my daily routine and it is very important and in focus my.

✓ I like writing because it is a very important part of my life and brings more discipline. I regularly write about my daily routine, and it is very important to me and helps me focus.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'writing' instead of 'right'. The original sentence also has missing verbs and unclear phrases such as 'more discipline in the writing' which is corrected to 'brings more discipline'. The phrase 'I I I regularly my write my daily routine' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'I regularly write about my daily routine'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Definitely right, right. I think change because they write is the my light is my right thing and I also.

✓ Definitely, writing changes. I think it changes because writing is my light and my right thing, and I also...

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'Definitely right, right' is incorrect; it should be 'Definitely, writing changes.' The modal verb 'think' is used correctly but the sentence lacks clarity and completion. The phrase 'they write is the my light is my right thing' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'writing is my light and my right thing'. The sentence is incomplete, so it is left open-ended as in the original.

× I prefer handwriting because it is very easy and and anytime any place writing in the paper and easy to write it in paper and I also favor and I like to write a paper.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is very easy. I can write anytime and anywhere on paper, and it is easy to write on paper. I also favor and like to write on paper.

The original sentence has repeated words ('and and'), missing prepositions, and unclear phrasing. 'Anytime any place writing in the paper' is corrected to 'I can write anytime and anywhere on paper'. 'Easy to write it in paper' is corrected to 'easy to write on paper'. The sentence is broken into smaller parts for clarity and grammatical correctness.