WritingPart 1 Informe

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Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Do you write a lot?

Candidato

Definitely, I write many materials about my manager, my advisor, because my advisor usually give me some projects, so I must rest the application for it and some other document, document, document about it.

Examinador

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidato

Actually, if I don't need other documents, I would like something for myself. For example, I like to write the novels. I really like big novels, so I think I will spend a lot of time to write a new novel for myself.

Examinador

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidato

For me, I afraid that I my sense that I write wouldn't change because I'm a Foxman. I enjoy Fox in something rather than various projects, so I won't write.

Examinador

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidato

I absolutely like like to type on the computer rather than use a paper to write, because it is much more convenient than use the pen to write and the type is more quick, more quicker than.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意动词时态和单复数形式。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot of documents for my manager and advisor because they often assign me projects. I usually prepare applications and other related materials for these projects.

What do you like to write? Why?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答中表达有些重复且不够流畅,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且注意冠词和时态的正确使用。

Ejemplo: If I don't have to write official documents, I enjoy writing novels. I especially like long novels, so I plan to spend a lot of time writing a new one for myself.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Puntuación: 40.0

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰,存在语法错误和词汇使用不当,建议简化句子并明确表达观点。

Ejemplo: I don't think my writing style will change because I prefer focusing on specific topics rather than many different projects.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,建议简化表达,注意比较级的正确使用,并保持句子流畅。

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer typing on the computer because it is more convenient and faster than writing by hand.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I write many materials about my manager, my advisor, because my advisor usually give me some projects, so I must rest the application for it and some other document, document, document about it.

I write many materials about my manager and my advisor, because my advisor usually gives me some projects, so I must prepare the application for them and some other documents about them.

这里的'materials'和'documents'是复数形式,必须与动词和代词保持一致。'advisor usually give'中的've'应改为's',因为主语是第三人称单数。'rest the application'应为'prepare the application',但根据题目只纠正语法错误。

Third person singular issue

× my advisor usually give me some projects

my advisor usually gives me some projects

主语'advisor'是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加's',即'gives'。

Singular and plural issue

× some other document, document, document about it.

some other documents about them.

'document'应为复数形式'documents',且代词应与复数保持一致,使用'them'。

Singular and plural issue

× I like to write the novels.

I like to write novels.

'novels'前不需要定冠词'the',且复数形式直接使用。

Verb + -ing form

× I think I will spend a lot of time to write a new novel for myself.

I think I will spend a lot of time writing a new novel for myself.

动词'spend'后应接动名词形式,故'to write'应改为'writing'。

Modal verb usage

× I afraid that I my sense that I write wouldn't change because I'm a Foxman.

I am afraid that my sense of what I write wouldn't change because I'm a Foxman.

缺少系动词'am',且句子结构混乱,调整为正确表达。

Singular and plural issue

× I enjoy Fox in something rather than various projects, so I won't write.

I enjoy foxes in something rather than various projects, so I won't write.

'Fox'应为复数形式'foxes',以符合语境。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I absolutely like like to type on the computer rather than use a paper to write, because it is much more convenient than use the pen to write and the type is more quick, more quicker than.

I absolutely like to type on the computer rather than use paper to write, because it is much more convenient than using a pen to write and typing is quicker.

'use a paper'应为'use paper','than use the pen'应为'than using a pen','more quick, more quicker'重复且错误,改为'quicker'。

Vocabulario

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
QuickFast; Hasty; Sudden; Intelligent
VariousDiverse
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